Daily Blog - Favourite season of the year

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Jul 23, 2012 18:21
I personally feel that all of the seasons can be liked for something. For example: The winter because of snow and Xmas, the spring because of the resurgent nature and the autumn because of its beautiful colours.

But I like the summer all the best. Maybe I liked it in childhood because of summer holiday. I don't know, but sure the summer is full of life. You can spend your time in the open. This is the period of holidays, excursions, garden parties, festivals, open-air programmes, swimming and of course the sports. In addition you can drink and eat great drink and meals at this time. For example the juicy and fresh fruits and juice. The people are draw together by these prgrammes and good foods and drinks. The summer is superb occasion on evolving and sinking of our ship, it may be friendly, love or familyrelationship.

It's my opinion. What d you believe?
crystal84
Jul 23, 2012 22:54
  • Daily Blog - Favourite season of the year

  • Daily Blog - Favourite season of the year

 
  • I personally feel that all of the seasons can be liked for something.

  • I personally feel that all of the seasons can be liked for something.

 
  • For example: The winter because of snow and Xmas, the spring because of the resurgent nature and the autumn because of its beautiful colours.

  • For example: The winter because of snow and Xmas, the spring because of the resurgent nature, and the autumn because of its beautiful colours.

 
  • But I like the summer all the best.

  • But I like summer best of all. {Or, simply, "I like summer best"}

 
  • Maybe I liked it in childhood because of summer holiday.

  • Maybe I liked it in childhood because of summer vacation.

 
  • I don't know, but sure the summer is full of life.

  • I don't know, but surely summer is full of life.

 
  • You can spend your time in the open.

  • You can spend your time outside. {Or, "outdoors"}

 
  • This is the period of holidays, excursions, garden parties, festivals, open-air programmes, swimming and of course the sports.

  • This is the period of holidays, excursions, garden parties, festivals, open-air programmes, swimming and of course sports.

 
  • In addition you can drink and eat great drink and meals at this time.

  • In addition you can drink and eat great drinks and meals at this time.

 
  • For example the juicy and fresh fruits and juice.

  • For example juicy and fresh fruits and juice.

 
  • The people are draw together by these prgrammes and good foods and drinks.

  • The people are drawn together by these prgrammes and good foods and drinks.

 
  • The summer is superb occasion on evolving and sinking of our ship, it may be friendly, love or familyrelationship.

  • The summer is superb occasion on evolving and sinking of our ship, it may be friendly, love or family relationship.

    I'm not sure what you're trying to say here, so I can't give a proper correction.

 
  • It's my opinion.

  • It's my opinion.

 
  • What d you believe?

  • What do you believe?

 

Jul 23, 2012 23:37 Pencil

  • The summer is superb occasion on evolving and sinking of our ship, it may be friendly, love or family relationship.

    I'm not sure what you're trying to say here, so I can't give a proper correction.

I would like to say: The summer give a superb occasion that you can make new ship or we can amneliorate the existent ship. It may be friend-, love- or family relationship.

Jul 23, 2012 23:43 crystal84
Okay, then you could say, "Summer gives a superb occasion for you to make new friendships and spend time with family and friends." The word "ship" by itself means "boat", so when you want to say "friendship" or "relationship", you have to write it out like this every time. If you want to refer specifically to a romantic relationship, you can write it like that: "romantic relationship", or you can refer to the person: "girlfriend/boyfriend", "partner", "spouse/husband/wife", "lover". I hope this is clear now. :)

Jul 23, 2012 23:54 Pencil
Yes, it's clear to me. And thanks again.
Pencil
Jul 23, 2012 23:38

Thank you for your correction.

AChan
Jul 24, 2012 06:13
  • I personally feel that all of the seasons can be liked for something.

  • I personally feel that there is something to like about in every season.

 
  • For example: The winter because of snow and Xmas, the spring because of the resurgent nature and the autumn because of its beautiful colours.

  • For example, there's winter because of its snow and Xmas, spring because of its resurgent nature and autumn because of its beautiful colours.

    This is how I would say it, but yours is okay. I like parallel structures, so having "its" in every clause feels neater.

 
  • Maybe I liked it in childhood because of summer holiday.

  • Maybe I liked it in when I was a child because of summer holidays.

    I feel this is a bit more natural.

    Anyways, I think "holidays" is British. Since I'm American, I would say "summer vacation", but you can choose either.

 
  • This is the period of holidays, excursions, garden parties, festivals, open-air programmes, swimming and of course the sports.

  • This is the period of holidays, excursions, garden parties, festivals, open-air programmes, swimming and, of course, the sports.

    A lot of English speakers would probably forget to use commas here, so don't worry too much about this.

 
  • In addition you can drink and eat great drink and meals at this time.

  • In addition, you can enjoy some great meals and beverages.

 
  • For example the juicy and fresh fruits and juice.

  • For example, you can have fresh fruits and juice.

    It sounds a bit unusual to have "juicy and fresh fruits" and then "juice" after it.

 
  • The people are draw together by these prgrammes and good foods and drinks.

  • The people are drawn together by these programmes, as well as the great food and beverages.

 
  • The summer is superb occasion on evolving and sinking of our ship, it may be friendly, love or familyrelationship.

  • Summer is the perfect time to form new relationships and to catch up with friends and family.

    Just my suggestion.

 
  • What d you believe?

  • What about yours? OR What's your favorite season?

    yours = "your opinion"

 
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