My Second Letter!

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Jul 10, 2012 01:33 Hungarian language learning english
Hi everybody,

I'm new here. This is a second letter (you know about the title), but I have to tell you it's an amazing website. I'm so glad because I have already searched a site such as it long ago. And now it was made success. I hope this site and you (who will correct / corrected my letters) can help me with my English.
I have already tried more learning english pages. There are betters and less betters. But I believe it will be really useful for me.

Today I have surfed on this page and I have remarked that there are some people who would like to learn Hungarian. I like this. The Hungarian language are very difficult (it is one of the heaviest foreign language on the world) but beside it's very expressive, euphonious with rich vocabulary. I wish all of them good luck for the language learning.

All the best,
Pencil
AChan
Jul 10, 2012 17:05
  • This is a second letter (you know about the title), but I have to tell you it's an amazing website.

  • This is my second letter (you can tell from the title), but I have to tell you it's an amazing website.

 
  • I'm so glad because I have already searched a site such as it long ago.

  • I'm so glad because I have already searched for such a site such as it a long ago.

    "looked for" instead of "searched for" would be a bit more colloquial.

 
  • And now it was made success.

  • And now, I finally found it.

    I think this is what you wanted to say.

 
  • I hope this site and you (who will correct / corrected my letters) can help me with my English.

  • I hope this site and you (who will correct / have corrected my letters) can help me with my English.

    It's always a bit weird to use "[something] and you". I suggest: "I hope this site and its members can help me with my English." A bit informal maybe: "I hope this site, as well as you guys, can help me with my English."

 
  • I have already tried more learning english pages.

  • I have already tried some of these English learning sites.

 
  • There are betters and less betters.

  • There are better ones and worse ones.

    Or "Some are better. Some are worse."

 
  • But I believe it will be really useful for me.

  • But I believe this one will be really useful for me.

    By "it", I'm assuming you mean this site.

 
  • Today I have surfed on this page and I have remarked that there are some people who would like to learn Hungarian.

  • Today, I have surfed on this site, and I have remarked that there are some people who would like to learn Hungarian.

    Like me! =) Anyways, maybe "I have noticed" instead of "I have remarked".

 
  • The Hungarian language are very difficult (it is one of the heaviest foreign language on the world) but beside it's very expressive, euphonious with rich vocabulary.

  • The Hungarian language is very difficult (it is one of the heaviest foreign language on the world), but otherwise, it's very expressive and euphonious, with rich vocabulary.

    "heaviest" doesn't work here. I'm not sure which word you are looking for. The first thing that comes into my mind is "one of the most complicated". Maybe perhaps "one of the densest". Also, I agree with you!

 
  • I wish all of them good luck for the language learning.

  • I wish all of them good luck in language learning.

    I would say "I wish all of them the best of luck in the language learning process."

 

One of the reasons I like this site so much is that there are active users that will give you corrections. You don't have to write to a specific person. I stopped using this site for a three year period, but I came back. Anyways, you're only the right track, so keep it up!

Jul 10, 2012 17:16 Pencil

  • And now, I finally found it.

    I think this is what you wanted to say.

I wanted to say " és most végre sikerült " so I could find a great learning site finally. I hope you understand it.

Jul 10, 2012 17:27 AChan
Yeah, so this correction would be the best thing to say in this context. You could also say "And now, I finally succeeded in finding it." and maybe even "I found it at last", but I think the one I originally suggested is best.

Also, I meant to correct one of your phrases to "a long time ago" instead of "a long ago", which is wrong.

Jul 10, 2012 17:28 Pencil
Thank you very much for your correction and advises connection with colloquial words and phrases.
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