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I like this book, because it is interesting to read about this history ship. When I saw the film, there was a sad love-story about a poor young man and a rich young lady. But the reality wasn’t romantic.
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My opinion about the book named "TITANIC! Paul Shipton"
I prefer "titled" instead of "named", but "named" is okay.
I like this book, because it is interesting to read about this the history of this ship / of this ship's history.
You don't really need the comma before "because".
You can say "the history of this ship" or "this ship's history"
But the reality wasn’t romantic.
or "But it wasn't romantic in the reality".
Hollywood has to put romance to attract audience. It's part of the Hollywood formula. :D
My opinion about the book named "TITANIC!", by Paul Shipton
I like this book, because it is interesting to read about this history ship ship's history.
But the in reality it wasn’t romantic.