My opinion about the book named "TITANIC! Paul Shipton"

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Jul 22, 2012 10:59
I like this book, because it is interesting to read about this history ship. When I saw the film, there was a sad love-story about a poor young man and a rich young lady. But the reality wasn’t romantic.
Jian
Jul 22, 2012 11:15
  • My opinion about the book named "TITANIC! Paul Shipton"

  • My opinion about the book named "TITANIC! Paul Shipton"

    I prefer "titled" instead of "named", but "named" is okay.

 
  • I like this book, because it is interesting to read about this history ship.

  • I like this book, because it is interesting to read about this the history of this ship / of this ship's history.

    You don't really need the comma before "because".

    You can say "the history of this ship" or "this ship's history"

 
  • But the reality wasn’t romantic.

  • But the reality wasn’t romantic.

    or "But it wasn't romantic in the reality".

 

Hollywood has to put romance to attract audience. It's part of the Hollywood formula. :D

Jul 22, 2012 11:17 Daniel
thanks
divisortheory
Jul 22, 2012 12:42
  • My opinion about the book named "TITANIC! Paul Shipton"

  • My opinion about the book named "TITANIC!", by Paul Shipton

 
  • I like this book, because it is interesting to read about this history ship.

  • I like this book, because it is interesting to read about this history ship ship's history.

 
  • But the reality wasn’t romantic.

  • But the in reality it wasn’t romantic.

 
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