A Happy Day
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Today noon, i am going to pick up my grilfriend, but when i arrive in her school, she's teacher said the class has done for 2 mins ago. Shit!
I was run to the place which her live at once. She dose not answer her mobile phone. I guessed that she forgot to take her mobile phone.
And when i went to her house,it is no one! Where is she! I'm worried very much!
But i just to wait her! Thanks god! After 3 mins,she came home! I’am very happy.
In the afternoon,we went to an exhibition of pictures who my grilfriend's friend's. The surprise is,i met my 4 friends.Acquaintances from four different places.
At night, My grilfriend cook 3 pieces of steak for me. They are delicious! And we opened a bottle of red wine. At last,we both a little drink.
Baby,you are so cute and beautiful!
I love you so much!
I was run to the place which her live at once. She dose not answer her mobile phone. I guessed that she forgot to take her mobile phone.
And when i went to her house,it is no one! Where is she! I'm worried very much!
But i just to wait her! Thanks god! After 3 mins,she came home! I’am very happy.
In the afternoon,we went to an exhibition of pictures who my grilfriend's friend's. The surprise is,i met my 4 friends.Acquaintances from four different places.
At night, My grilfriend cook 3 pieces of steak for me. They are delicious! And we opened a bottle of red wine. At last,we both a little drink.
Baby,you are so cute and beautiful!
I love you so much!
Today noon, i was going to pick up my grilfriend, but when i arrived at her school, her teacher said that the class ended for 2 mins ago.
You are talking pas tense! :D
You need to say "her" not ("she's"- it means .she is.)
I was run to the place which her live at once.
I ran to a place where she once lived*
She dose not answer her mobile phone.
If you are talking pas tense, you need to say " she did not.."
I guessed that she forgot to take her mobile phone with her.
And when i went to her house,it(there*) is no one!
At night, My grilfriend cook 3 pieces of steak for me.
"in the evening" it sounds more natural :D
Today at noon, I was going to pick up my girlfriend, but when i arrived at her school, her teacher said that class ended 2 mins ago.
I ran to her house at once.
She did not answer her mobile phone.
And when i went to her house, there was no one home/there!
I'm worried so much!
But I just waited for her!
Thanks god!
I was very happy.
In the afternoon, we went to an exhibition of paintings which were painted by a friend of my girlfriend's.
The surprise is... I met four of my friends there.
That evening, my girlfriend cooked 3 pieces of steak for me.
They were delicious!
At last, we both had a little drink.