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Aug 07th 2012 07:07
My American friend who is living Japan and her brother who will come to Japan will come to my house next week, I wonder if it's good idea for them to cook "Osechi".

Do you know "Osechi"? We usually cook it when the new year party.(as seen this picture)

How about my "osechi"? looks yummy?

If you come to Japan and to eat osechi will you enjoy?


日本に住んでいるアメリカ人の友達の兄弟が来日して、来週我が家に遊びに来るので、おせちを作ろうかと思うけど、どうかな。

おせちって知っていますか？いつも元旦に食べます。この写真です。

私のおせちはどうですか？おいしそうでしょう？

もし、あなたが日本にきて、おせちを食べれたら、嬉しいですか？
hazmat
Thank you for your correction!
Aug 07th 2012 07:16
  • My American friend who is living Japan and her brother who will come to Japan will come to my house next week, I wonder if it's good idea for them to cook "Osechi".

  • My American friend, who is currently living in Japan, and her brother, who will be coming to Japan, will come to my house next week. I wonder if it's a good idea for them to cook "Osechi".

    Using commas for the interrupts.

 
  • Do you know "Osechi"?

  • Are you familiar with "Osechi"?

 
  • We usually cook it when the new year party.(as seen this picture)

  • We usually cook it during the New Year's party (as seen this picture).

 
  • How about my "osechi"?

  • How about my "Osechi" in the photo above?

    Are you referring to the "Osechi" in the picture as what you made?

 
  • looks yummy?

  • Does it look yummy?

 
  • If you come to Japan and to eat osechi will you enjoy?

  • If you come to Japan and eat Osechi will you enjoy it?

 
I hope to go to Japan someday and try Osechi when I am there. ^_^
Aug 08th 2012 03:16 Dainys
“

  • My American friend, who is currently living in Japan, and her brother, who will be coming to Japan, will come to my house next week. I wonder if it's a good idea for them to cook "Osechi".

    Using commas for the interrupts.

”
If you want to have a more natural flow, you can use a different word rather than "come." So you could write: "My American friend, who is currently living in Japan, and her brother, who will be coming to Japan, will visit my house next week."
Aug 08th 2012 03:17 Dainys
“

  • We usually cook it during the New Year's party (as seen this picture).

”
One small fix. It should be "as seen in this picture," not "as seen in picture."
Aug 08th 2012 16:06 nacchi
hazmatsan

Thanks for correction. To try to eat osechi when you come in Japan however you are able to eat during new year season.

Dainys san

Thanks for correction
I'll continue to write my entries. I want to write good English!
Aug 09th 2012 00:30 hazmat
ありがとう　nacchiさん。 ^_^ I will try and go during a New Years then. おいし！ :D
Grant
Thank you for your correction!
Aug 07th 2012 08:23
  • How about my "osechi"?

  • Does my "Osechi" look yummy?

    This is another option, if you want to combine the two sentences.

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Aug 08th 2012 21:46 nacchi
I want to write a long sentence, it was a helpful way. Thank you
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