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My Summer holiday comes.I feel relaxed but a little bored.I don't have any plan for my holiday,even through I have many intrests.
I almost stayed at home all the day,so I haven't yet experienced more things.
I have seen The Avengers last month,I like Loki this character so much as I like the actor Tom Hiddleston.I pulished a micro-blog about Loki&Thor with a picture the day before yesterday what surprised me is the number of forwarding grown to more than 900! It never happened to my personel micro-blog.I felt excited there were many people like me who adored(I have a question that should i use the past tense to the "adore"?) Tom Hiddleston.
And I followed the micro-blog of England News and The Cate of London today.I want to go to Britain to learn design knowledge.I never went to Europe before, I think there is different culture from our East.;)
Back to my life,I am enjoying my Summer holiday now.Tommorow I plan to draw some picture about Loki or Tom for myself,ehehehehehehe...
I almost stayed at home all the day,so I haven't yet experienced more things.
I have seen The Avengers last month,I like Loki this character so much as I like the actor Tom Hiddleston.I pulished a micro-blog about Loki&Thor with a picture the day before yesterday what surprised me is the number of forwarding grown to more than 900! It never happened to my personel micro-blog.I felt excited there were many people like me who adored(I have a question that should i use the past tense to the "adore"?) Tom Hiddleston.
And I followed the micro-blog of England News and The Cate of London today.I want to go to Britain to learn design knowledge.I never went to Europe before, I think there is different culture from our East.;)
Back to my life,I am enjoying my Summer holiday now.Tommorow I plan to draw some picture about Loki or Tom for myself,ehehehehehehe...
我的暑假到了。我感到轻松但有一点无聊。我对暑假没有一点计划,即使我有很多兴趣。
我几乎一整天待在家里,所以我基本没有经历什么事情。
我上个月看了复仇者联盟,我很喜欢洛基这个角色甚至于我也喜欢他的扮演者汤姆-希德尔斯顿。我前天发表了一条关于洛基和索尔的微博并附上了一张图片,让我吃惊的是这条微博的转发量居然超过了900!这是我微博从未发生过的事。我感到很激动因为有这么多像我一样喜欢(我有个问题,就是这里“adore”这词要用过去时吗?)汤姆-希德尔斯顿的人。
我今天关注了英国这些事儿和伦敦美食的微博。我想去英国学习设计。我从没去过欧洲,我想那应该有不同于东方的文化。;)
回到我的生活中,我现在要享受我的暑假。明天我计划着画一些洛基或汤姆的画给我自己,额呵呵呵呵呵呵…
我几乎一整天待在家里,所以我基本没有经历什么事情。
我上个月看了复仇者联盟,我很喜欢洛基这个角色甚至于我也喜欢他的扮演者汤姆-希德尔斯顿。我前天发表了一条关于洛基和索尔的微博并附上了一张图片,让我吃惊的是这条微博的转发量居然超过了900!这是我微博从未发生过的事。我感到很激动因为有这么多像我一样喜欢(我有个问题,就是这里“adore”这词要用过去时吗?)汤姆-希德尔斯顿的人。
我今天关注了英国这些事儿和伦敦美食的微博。我想去英国学习设计。我从没去过欧洲,我想那应该有不同于东方的文化。;)
回到我的生活中,我现在要享受我的暑假。明天我计划着画一些洛基或汤姆的画给我自己,额呵呵呵呵呵呵…

My Summer holiday comes has started.
I don't have any plan for my holiday,even through I have many interests.
I By almost stayed staying at home all the day,so I haven't been able to yet experienced more a lot of things.
I have seen saw 'The Avengers' last month. I like the character, Loki this character so much a lot, as I like the actor Tom Hiddleston.
OR, you may write like this:
I saw the movie, 'The Avengers' last month. I like the character, 'Loki' as I like Tom Hiddleston
I published a micro-blog about Loki & Thor with a picture the day before yesterday. What surprised me was the number of forwards, which has grown to more than 900!
It never happened to my personel personal micro-blog.
I felt excited there were many people like me who adored(I have a question that should i use the past tense to the "adore"?) Tom Hiddleston.
I felt excited that there were many people like me who adore Tom Hiddleston (I think you can use adore. not 100% sure. will confirm soon)
And I followed the micro-blog of England News and The Cate of London today.
I have never went gone to Europe before, I think there is different culture from our East.;)I have not been to Europe yet, and I think it has a different culture from the East :)
Tommorow I plan to draw some pictures about of Loki or Tom for myself,ehehehehehehe...
My summer holiday has come.
I don't have any plans for my holiday,even through I have many interests.
I stay at home almost all day , so I haven't yet experienced more things.
I saw The Avengers last month, I like Loki's character as much as I like the actor Tom Hiddleston.
I published a micro-blog about Loki&Thor with a picture the day before yesterday. What surprised me is that the number of (forwarding)? had grown to more than 900!
forwarding -
visits?
shares?
It has never happened to my personal micro-blog before.
I felt excited there were many people like me who adored(I have a question that should i use the past tense to the "adore"?) Tom Hiddleston.
You can say
who adored Tom Hiddleston.
OR
who adore Tom Hiddleston.
Either is fine.
I have never been to Europe before, I think there is different culture from our East.;)
My summer holiday is here.
I don't have any plans for my holiday, even through I have many intrests.
I almost stayed at home all the day, so I have yet to experience more things.
I saw The Avengers last month. I like the character Loki so much, as I like the actor Tom Hiddleston.
I pulished a micro-blog about Loki&Thor with a picture the day before yesterday. What surprised me was that the number of forwarding grew to more than 900! It has never happened to my personel micro-blog.
I felt excited that there were many people like me who adore Tom Hiddleston.
如果你用"adored"别人能觉得人们现在不喜欢他了或他死了。=/
I want to go to Britain to study design knowledge.
I have never gone to Europe before; I think they have a different culture from our East.;)
"I think their Western culture is different from our East" is closer to native speaking, but...
我想那应该有不同于东方的文化 => I suppose Western culture should be different from our East.
Tomorrow I plan to draw some pictures of Loki or Tom for myself,ehehehehehehe...
My summer holiday is here.
By "summer holiday" do you mean a few days from work/school, or several weeks from school? Here we would call several weeks off from school a "summer break".
I don't have any plans for my holiday, even though I have many interests.
When you use "any," use the plural noun after it: "any plans, any cats, any papers, any buildings".
I almost stayed at home all most of the day, so I haven't yet experienced more many things yet.
I assume you meant "most of the day" when you said "almost all of the day". :) Correct me if I'm wrong!
To say "more things," you have to have experienced something already. You didn't say you experienced something else, so I changed it to "many things".
"Yet" sounds more natural at the end of the sentence.
I have seen saw The Avengers last month. I like the character Loki this character so much as I like the actor Tom Hiddleston.
I pulished a micro-blog about Loki&Thor with a picture the day before yesterday. What surprised me is the number of forwarding views grown grew to more than 900! That has never happened to my personal micro-blog.
I felt excited there were many people like me who adore (I have a question. that Should I use the past [or present] tense to the of "adore"?) Tom Hiddleston.
They (and you) still "adore" him, so it is not past tense.
I want to go to Britain to learn about designing.
There should be more information here; designing what? For example, designing the inside of houses.
I have never went gone to Europe before. I think they are have a different culture than from our those in the East.;)
Tomorrow I plan to draw some pictures of Loki or Tom for myself,ehehehehehehe...
Like when you use "any," when you use "some" make sure you use plural nouns. "Some pictures, some plates, some cities, some people."