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I had a Engineering drawing test this morning.Because i am sleep too late last night so i felt out of power. hunger and tried, i dragged my slim body went to my classroom .
What is wrong with me ? I can not even work out the first question,i believe it was nothing but my brain blocked.Then i gave up it and went on sloving other jobs .However ,it seemed too simple for me .I finished the test within an hour and a half, early than the required time.When out of the classroom ,we discussed the test we had .It was incredible what mistakes i had made.It is all about something wrongs because of carelessness.I am guilty of
not reviewing my book more closely.
I only have another two testes in this semester ."college math"and "college English".The math is the very subject i am worried about.Fortunately,i still can spare two days to review it .Come on !
Believe in yourself.
What is wrong with me ? I can not even work out the first question,i believe it was nothing but my brain blocked.Then i gave up it and went on sloving other jobs .However ,it seemed too simple for me .I finished the test within an hour and a half, early than the required time.When out of the classroom ,we discussed the test we had .It was incredible what mistakes i had made.It is all about something wrongs because of carelessness.I am guilty of
not reviewing my book more closely.
I only have another two testes in this semester ."college math"and "college English".The math is the very subject i am worried about.Fortunately,i still can spare two days to review it .Come on !
Believe in yourself.

Because i am sleep too late last night so i felt out of power.
You shouldn't start a sentence with because. Also, humans generally are known to have energy rather than power, so consider using energy instead.
Consider using this sentence: "I slept too late last night, so I felt like I didn't have enough energy."
hunger Hungry and tried tired, i I dragged my slim body went to my the classroom .
I know it could be deemed as correct to call it your classroom, but in actual reality, the classroom doesn't belong to you, so I prefer to generalise and call it "the classroom" over calling it "my classroom".
I can not even work out the first question,i believe it was nothing but my brain being blocked.
Then i gave it up it and went on sloving solving other jobs.
When you use jobs, do you mean questions?
I finished the test within an hour and a half, early earlier than the required time.
It is all about something being wrongs because of carelessness.
I only have another two testes tests in this semester, ."college math"and "college English".
The Math is the very subject I am worried about.
Fortunately i still can still spare two days reviewing it .
If I do not use "jobs" what word should i use?
As the sentence "Work finished i have time to play computer game.",it is also being noun add adjective~~
I can not understand ~~
Can you teach me ?Thanks a lot
Thanks !!!!
谢谢你,马修。