Aug 03rd 2012 18:23 asampson87 made 18 corrections for Excuse
Nice story.

Aug 03rd 2012 17:26 DonPMusey made 15 corrections for Excuse
Really good. Your written English is going from strength to strength. Sorry I haven't corrected some of your recent posts but I was ...

Aug 02nd 2012 23:53 asampson87 made 11 corrections for No More Sloppy Posts!
Very well done. You improve so quickly. You're a most worthy student/teacher.

Aug 02nd 2012 11:00 asampson87 made 12 corrections for 3 Notebooks
Well done. Sorry for it taking a while to correct. I've been quite busy actually. Much less sloppy.

Jul 28th 2012 02:24 Sedgehead made 4 corrections for No More Sloppy Posts!
You are doing great with English, much better than many people.

Jul 26th 2012 00:50 asampson87 made 7 corrections for No Post, No Dexter
This other person is quite busy, they posted on both your and Yoyo's in a short amount of time.

Jul 25th 2012 22:49 tony made 13 corrections for Editing Posts as You Corrected
Other people at Lang-8 have used this strategy of making recordings of entries after they have been corrected. I hope that it works well ...

Jul 22nd 2012 22:48 DonPMusey made 5 corrections for Feeling Blue
Very few mistakes. I feel bad now. Part of the shitstorm at work was my fault. Sorry!

Jul 22nd 2012 22:30 asampson87 made 13 corrections for Sunstroke
Nice. But you sound like a pansy since you can't walk 5 minutes in the sun without getting heat stoke.

Jul 22nd 2012 01:30 Echo01 made 7 corrections for Sunstroke
: )

Jul 21st 2012 20:26 asampson87 made 6 corrections for Feeling Blue
Very good. Sorry to hear you weren't feeling so cheery.

Jul 20th 2012 17:50 ☆Aileen♪ commented on Jamais vu
Interesting post:) I like it.

Jul 19th 2012 23:22 asampson87 commented on I Played Badminton
I tried to comment, but my computer malfunctioned and deleted all of my comments. Oh well, the first corrections pretty much said everyth...

Jul 19th 2012 23:21 asampson87 commented on I Played Badminton
I tried to comment, but my computer malfunctioned and deleted all of my comments. Oh well, the first corrections pretty much said everyth...

Jul 19th 2012 23:19 asampson87 commented on I Played Badminton
I tried to comment, but my computer malfunctioned and deleted all of my comments. Oh well, the first corrections pretty much said everyth...

Jul 19th 2012 23:16 asampson87 made 7 corrections for I Played Badminton
Nice. You should really use more adjectives when describing your friend. Work on separating your run-on sentences into smaller more diges...

Jul 19th 2012 23:16 asampson87 made 7 corrections for I Played Badminton
Nice. You should really use more adjectives when describing your friend. Work on separating your run-on sentences into smaller more diges...

Jul 19th 2012 23:15 asampson87 made 7 corrections for I Played Badminton
Nice. You should really use more adjectives when describing your friend. Work on separating your run-on sentences into smaller more diges...

Jul 19th 2012 14:03 asampson87 made 15 corrections for Jamais vu
Great post. You've really been taking the advice here to heart, and it shows. I've actually thought a lot about that exact exa...

Jul 19th 2012 05:55 BerinTokli made 6 corrections for Jamais vu
Very nice English. It felt like it was coming from a native English speaker. My corrections are not that big really, and your writing sty...

Jul 18th 2012 14:42 DonPMusey made 7 corrections for I Played Badminton
很好！ Your writing is definitely improving. It's a lot clearer and has much less punctuation mistakes.

Jul 17th 2012 02:25 asampson87 made 11 corrections for KTV
You use run-on sentences (sentences that keep going and going) a bit too much. You can split many of your sentences up into two or someti...

Jul 16th 2012 18:35 DonPMusey made 6 corrections for Dexter (It has little to do...
I would recommend 'Breaking Bad'. I don't often watch dramas but this one is really good. It's about a chemistry teacher ...

Jul 16th 2012 14:56 asampson87 made 4 corrections for Dexter (It has little to do...
Very good. Marked improvement.

Jul 15th 2012 23:29 DonPMusey made 6 corrections for Being a procrastinator
Interesting.

Jul 14th 2012 22:37 asampson87 made 5 corrections for Black Friday: Friday The Th...
I actually have never called it "Black Friday". I've always ever called it just "Friday the 13th." In America, &q...

Jul 14th 2012 22:24 asampson87 made 7 corrections for Being a procrastinator
Well done. Borderline pandering at a certain point...

Jul 14th 2012 01:11 tehbey commented on Black Friday: Friday The Th...
I think it originates from times of ancient templars. On friday the 13 they were sentenced to death. I heard some of them escaped in ship...

Jul 12th 2012 23:32 asampson87 made 4 corrections for How Should I Write a Post?
Very well written. If you need a third explanation of the words, ask me later, as I don't feel like writing it all right now.

Jul 12th 2012 23:00 asampson87 made 9 corrections for Shelly`s Birthday Night
Excellent. The language you chose was well suited for the topic. It felt like more gossipy language with phrases like "by the way&qu...

Jul 12th 2012 18:38 DonPMusey made 6 corrections for How Should I Write a Post?
'translate' is usually used for changing something from one language to another. Or it can be used just to put something into lan...

Jul 12th 2012 01:29 wobbles made 7 corrections for How Should I Write a Post?
如果你要多多解释。。。只问我。。。 你的英文特别好！！

Jul 11th 2012 15:13 asampson87 made 2 corrections for Day 2
Really good overall.

Jul 09th 2012 18:15 DonPMusey made 11 corrections for Summer
Lovely stuff.

Jul 09th 2012 15:18 DonPMusey made 6 corrections for I`m lazy and I know it (I`m...
Very good Jessie! One other thing. The stroke you use as an apostrophe goes in the wrong direction. You should use ' and not `. A...