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Jun 11th 2012 05:35
hi guys my name is Ashkan and i am 26 years old.I am living in Iran.My major is English translation.I would like to find good friends.I think my English language is weak.I appreciate you if you help me for improving my English language.
permivan
Jun 11th 2012 05:43
  • hello everybody

  • Hello Everybody

    You must always capitalize the first and last words in the title.

 
  • hi guys my name is Ashkan and i am 26 years old.

  • Hi guys! My name is Ashkan and I am 26 years old.

    Always capitalize the first word of a sentence, and always capitalize the word "I."

 
  • I am living in Iran.

  • I live in Iran.

    This is a more natural way to say it.

 
  • My major is English translation.

  • My major is English translation.

    Good!

 
  • I would like to find good friends.

  • I would like to find good friends.

    Good!

 
  • I think my English language is weak.

  • I think my English language is weak.

 
  • I appreciate you if you help me for improving my English language.

  • I would appreciate it you if you would help me for improve my English language.

 
Nice to meet you!
Jun 11th 2012 06:01 Dark.Defender
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