Could you please correct my Email?

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Feb 12, 2014 08:09
Hi everyone, I sent this Email below to book photo shooting studio.
However I don't think my expression is not so good. :(
So if you have time, please make my sentence better expression.

Title: Inquiry for booking
To whom this may concern,

I'm writing this e-mail because I'd like to book for Studio Package $290.
As for price, Is this including fee of a cameraman, right?
I need individual photography with white background, please see attached
If possible, I'd like to book this week, so if you have some schedule
available, could you please let me know.