Could you please correct my Email?

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Feb 12, 2014 08:09
Hi everyone, I sent this Email below to book photo shooting studio.
However I don't think my expression is not so good. :(
So if you have time, please make my sentence better expression.
Thanks!

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Title: Inquiry for booking
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To whom this may concern,

I'm writing this e-mail because I'd like to book for Studio Package $290.
As for price, Is this including fee of a cameraman, right?
I need individual photography with white background, please see attached
file.
If possible, I'd like to book this week, so if you have some schedule
available, could you please let me know.

Thanks
Ken
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