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Rachel
  • English
  • Spanish, French

  • it's midnight now, i feel tired, Maybe i have better go to sleep.
  • it's midnight now, i feel tired, Maybe i have better go to sleep.it's midnight now, I feel tired, maybe I had better go to sleep.
  • "Maybe" doesn't need to be capitalized, and the past tense form of "have" is "had".

Jun 10, 2012 15:30 Public go shopping
Rachel
  • English
  • Spanish, French

  • i bought a new pair of shoes, it's beautiful and fashional.
  • i bought a new pair of shoes, it's beautiful and fashional.I bought a new pair of shoes, they're beautiful and fashionable.
  • Use "they're" because a pair of shoes is considered a plural object. "Fashional" isn't a word- the one to use is "fashionable".

Jun 10, 2012 15:30 Public go shopping
Rachel
  • English
  • Spanish, French

  • i suppose she don't like to do this.
  • i suppose she don't like to do this.I supposed she didn't like to do this.
  • Past tense of "suppose" is "suppose"; same for "don't" and "didn't".

Jun 10, 2012 15:30 Public go shopping
Rachel
  • English
  • Spanish, French

  • this maked me surprised.
  • this maked me surprised.this made me surprised.

Jun 10, 2012 15:30 Public go shopping
Rachel
  • English
  • Spanish, French

  • i found a secret, she is crazy to go shopping,
  • i found a secret, she is crazy to go shopping, I found out a secret, she is crazy to go shopping,
  • Put in "out" to make the sentence flow smoother.

Jun 10, 2012 15:29 Public go shopping
Rachel
  • English
  • Spanish, French

  • we talked about what happen recently in our life.
  • we talked about what happen recently in our life.we talked about what happened recently in our life.
  • Make sure you use the past tense of "happen", which is "happened", since this took place in the past.

Jun 10, 2012 15:29 Public go shopping
Rachel
  • English
  • Spanish, French

  • we maked a date to go shopping and have a chat at 3 pm.
  • we maked a date to go shopping and have a chat at 3 pm.we made a date to go shopping and have a chat at 3 pm. ORwe marked a date to go shopping and have a chat at 3 pm.
  • Okay. I wasn't quite sure if it was a tense error- see top version- or a spelling error- see bottom version- so I corrected both. "Maked" isn't a word- use made to express the past tense of "make". "Marked" would be the correct spelling if it was a misspelling.

Jun 10, 2012 15:29 Public go shopping
Rachel
  • English
  • Spanish, French

  • i havn't contacted my former workmate in two months.
  • i havn't contacted my former workmate in two months.I haven't contacted my former workmate in two months.
  • "I" needs to be capitalized because it's a proper noun when standing by itself. A misspelling from "havn't" to "haven't".

Jun 10, 2012 15:29 Public go shopping
Sandy_tan
  • Mandarin
  • English

right

Jun 10, 2012 15:29 Public go shopping
Sandy_tan
  • Mandarin
  • English

thank you, I supposed "have not" equals havn't, I got it now.

Jun 10, 2012 15:29 Public go shopping

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