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i havn't contacted my former workmate in two months.
we maked a date to go shopping and have a chat at 3 pm. ^_^
we talked about what happen recently in our life.
i found a secret, she is crazy to go shopping,
this maked me surprised. i suppose she don't like to do this.
i bought a new pair of shoes, it's beautiful and fashional.
This year, sugar color is much more popular. Some clothes and shoes are desiged with sugar color.
it's midnight now, i feel tired, Maybe i have better go to sleep. good night.
i havn't contacted my former workmate in two months.I haven't contacted my former workmate in two months.
"I" needs to be capitalized because it's a proper noun when standing by itself. A misspelling from "havn't" to "haven't".
we maked a date to go shopping and have a chat at 3 pm.we made a date to go shopping and have a chat at 3 pm. ORwe marked a date to go shopping and have a chat at 3 pm.
Okay. I wasn't quite sure if it was a tense error- see top version- or a spelling error- see bottom version- so I corrected both. "Maked" isn't a word- use made to express the past tense of "make". "Marked" would be the correct spelling if it was a misspelling.
we talked about what happen recently in our life.we talked about what happened recently in our life.
Make sure you use the past tense of "happen", which is "happened", since this took place in the past.
i found a secret, she is crazy to go shopping, I found out a secret, she is crazy to go shopping,
Put in "out" to make the sentence flow smoother.
this maked me surprised.this made me surprised.
i suppose she don't like to do this.I supposed she didn't like to do this.
Past tense of "suppose" is "suppose"; same for "don't" and "didn't".
i bought a new pair of shoes, it's beautiful and fashional.I bought a new pair of shoes, they're beautiful and fashionable.
Use "they're" because a pair of shoes is considered a plural object. "Fashional" isn't a word- the one to use is "fashionable".
it's midnight now, i feel tired, Maybe i have better go to sleep.it's midnight now, I feel tired, maybe I had better go to sleep.
"Maybe" doesn't need to be capitalized, and the past tense form of "have" is "had".