Shoking

Shocking

I went to the theater theatre to see a preview of a film which my favorite actor performed in.

In English it would be 'cinema' instead of the 'theatre' to see a film :)

However,I can't got this thicket.However, I could not get a ticket

'Can't get this ticket' is in present tense. This already happened to you, so you would say "could not get a ticket"

And so many pepole people prvented prevented me from seeing him, I could only to see his the top of a head.

My friend and I waited to see him untill until the cellemony ceremony finished.

It would be better to say: Me and my friend waited until the end of the cermony to see him.

I was really excited because thre there is was only a few pepole people and the distance is was so short.

You change from past and present tense a bit here :)

As a result,he was without taking any notice of us. - As a result, he did not take any notice of us

I was really, really sad and shoking. shocked!