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Recentry, I'm hectic. So, I don't have enough time to write diary.
I wanat to write every day though...
To keep my dairy almost every day,I'm going to write about my day's events.
Yesterday, Of course I worked.
I got up at seven and whashed my face, brushed my teeth,changed clothes.
my job started at eight.
I droped of one of the kid with his siter.
His younger sister had used stroller until recentry.
But now, She can walk to his school. great!!
It takes about 20 min one way.
After we droped him off, we got back home and I cooked for luch.
It was Omelet containig fried rice.
She can't eat ketchup. So I cooked fried rice with butter.It was nice and could he eat!
Arter that, we tried to go the children room in front of our condo's condo.
Because, it was raining. So, we couldn't play outside.
There were a lot of children. So she didn't want to go inside.
She is very shy.
We ended up plying at our condo's community room for about one hour.
I fed her, cleaned up my room and she took a nap.
During she took a nap, I noticed my I POD TOUCH lost!
I looked for everywhere.but noyhing...
I thought when I cleaned up my room, I threw away garbage...my be that time.
I asked a door man and checked it.
But,nothing...
When I sat the sofa, I found it on it!! there was under the story book!
Wake up me!!
We picked one of the kid up and went to the park.
It was chilly.So we stayed there for only one hour.
After we got back home, I fedthe kids and gave the kids tub.
Host dad came home at seven thirty, So I have done my job!
It was nice day.
I wanat to write every day though...
To keep my dairy almost every day,I'm going to write about my day's events.
Yesterday, Of course I worked.
I got up at seven and whashed my face, brushed my teeth,changed clothes.
my job started at eight.
I droped of one of the kid with his siter.
His younger sister had used stroller until recentry.
But now, She can walk to his school. great!!
It takes about 20 min one way.
After we droped him off, we got back home and I cooked for luch.
It was Omelet containig fried rice.
She can't eat ketchup. So I cooked fried rice with butter.It was nice and could he eat!
Arter that, we tried to go the children room in front of our condo's condo.
Because, it was raining. So, we couldn't play outside.
There were a lot of children. So she didn't want to go inside.
She is very shy.
We ended up plying at our condo's community room for about one hour.
I fed her, cleaned up my room and she took a nap.
During she took a nap, I noticed my I POD TOUCH lost!
I looked for everywhere.but noyhing...
I thought when I cleaned up my room, I threw away garbage...my be that time.
I asked a door man and checked it.
But,nothing...
When I sat the sofa, I found it on it!! there was under the story book!
Wake up me!!
We picked one of the kid up and went to the park.
It was chilly.So we stayed there for only one hour.
After we got back home, I fedthe kids and gave the kids tub.
Host dad came home at seven thirty, So I have done my job!
It was nice day.
My Life
Recently, I'm feeling hectic.
So, I don't have enough time to write a diary.
I want to write every day though...
To keep my diary almost every day, I'm going to write about my day's events.
I got up at seven and washed my face, brushed my teeth and changed clothes.
My job started at eight.
I dropped off one of the kids with his sister.
His younger sister had used a stroller until recently.
But now, she can walk to his school without one.
Great!! d (^_^) b
It takes about 20 minutes one way.
After we dropped him off, we got back home and I cooked for lunch.
It was an omelet containing fried rice.
It was nice and he could eat!
After that, we tried to go the children room in front of our condo's condo.
We ended up playing at our condo's community room for about one hour.
but nothing...
maybe that time.
After we got back home, I fed the kids and gave the kids a bath.
Recently, it's been hectic.
Different way of expressing:
Recently, my life has been hectic.
It's been hectic recently.
So, I don't have enough time to write diaries.
Yesterday, of course I worked.
Suggestion:
Of course, I worked yesterday.
His younger sister had been using a stroller until recently.
"had been using" implies continuity.
After we dropped him off, we got back home, and I cooked for lunch.
It was nice, and he could eat!
After that, we tried to go the children room in front of our condo's condo.
Condo's condo...?
Because, it was raining.
So, we couldn't play outside.
Suggestion:
It was raining, so we couldn't play outside.
We couldn't play outside because it was raining.
So she didn't want to go inside.
Suggestion:
There were a lot of children, so she didn't want to go inside.
She didn't want to go inside because there were a lot of children.
I fed her, cleaned up my room, and she took a nap.
During her nap, I noticed that I had lost my I POD TOUCH lost!
I looked for everywhere.
I looked everywhere.
I looked for it everywhere.
but nothing...
Suggestion:
But I wasn't able to find it.
I thought that when I cleaned up my room, I threw it away with the garbage...
I asked the door man and checked the garbage.
But, there was nothing...
When I sat on the sofa, I found it on it!!
there it was, under the story book!
Wake up me!!
We don't use this expression in English. Perhaps:
Wake up, momo!
We picked one of the kids up and went to the park.
Who's we?
So we stayed there for only one hour.
Suggestion:
It was chilly, so we only stayed there for an hour.
We only stayed there for an hour because it was chilly.
My host dad came home at seven thirty. So I have done my job!
It was a nice day.
1. Do not forget articles (a, an, the).
2. Try to combine short sentences into a longer sentence. That way, your writing isn't so fragmented.
3. Double check spelling.
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