Hi~ great to be here. Could you please teach me.!^^
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These days, I Watch TV show of America that 'Desperate
Housewives', and 'Morden familly'. because It will
great help to me that I study English. Actually, I don't
understand without dialog of korean .
I want to be good in English.
What should I do for my English.
I'm trying hard to study my English. I watch TV show or
moive, and read the books, and listen to English
conversation in my loptop every days.
However There're a lot of words still that I don't know.
It's hard for me to express what I want to say.
because Some experssion have no satisfactory Korean equivalent.
difference of thinking, different of word order...
OMG..
but I'll try to do my best from now on.
So that, to improve my English I decied to keep a diary in English.
I wish I could talking to native speakers with smile.
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Please let me know, where is the wrong?
감사합니다^^
Housewives', and 'Morden familly'. because It will
great help to me that I study English. Actually, I don't
understand without dialog of korean .
I want to be good in English.
What should I do for my English.
I'm trying hard to study my English. I watch TV show or
moive, and read the books, and listen to English
conversation in my loptop every days.
However There're a lot of words still that I don't know.
It's hard for me to express what I want to say.
because Some experssion have no satisfactory Korean equivalent.
difference of thinking, different of word order...
OMG..
but I'll try to do my best from now on.
So that, to improve my English I decied to keep a diary in English.
I wish I could talking to native speakers with smile.
---------------------------
Please let me know, where is the wrong?
감사합니다^^
Hi~ great to be here. Could you please teach me English? ^^
These days, I have been watching two American TV shows called 'Desperate
Housewives', and 'Modern family'.
I think it will be
Sentences do not begin with "because", unless you change the clauses, but in this case it's incorrect. ^^
a great help to me for studying English.
understand anything without reading the Korean subtitles.
What should I do for my English?
I'm trying hard to study my English.
I watch TV shows or
movies, and read books, and listen to English
conversations in my laptop every day.
However, there are still a lot of words that I don't know.
It's hard for me to express what I want to say, <- Insert a comma here :D
because some expressions have no satisfactory Korean equivalent.
Different way of thinking, different of word order...
But I'll try to do my best from now on.
So in order to improve my English, I decided to keep a diary in English.
I wish I could talk to native speakers with a smile.
Please let me know my mistakes.
Don't worry! Your English is very good. :) Your mistakes were mostly spelling errors and word order mistakes.
If you want to improve your spelling, try to review your entry using a dictionary when you finish writing. That way, you can see your spelling errors! :)
For grammar mistakes, that's our job. We will help you pointing out unnatural or wrong grammar that you may have in your writing. ;)
Also, I'm sure you can already talk with people from other countries with a smile! Even if you can't speak fluently, a smile is very important. It shows to the native speaker that you're trying your best at speaking with him/her, and that's a really nice feeling. :)
It was a great help to me. I am impressed with your kindness!