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May 22nd 2012 01:13
Hello. Nice to meet you.
Last Sanday,I sent a present to my mother as Mother's day of one week late .
When I bothered what present is good,and if she is pleased with. the day passed. In the end,
I decided to send light pink hydrangea for my mother.It begin the rainy season on June in Japan. I think the hydrangea match rainy season and It will bossom beaty from now.
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Thank you for your correction!
May 22nd 2012 04:40
  • Last Sanday,I sent a present to my mother as Mother's day of one week late .

  • Last Sanday,I sent a present to my mother for Mother's day, but I was one week late.

    In english, you can't say : "Mother's day of one week late", you have to separate the elements even though they are related.

    suggestion : even though I was one week late.

 
  • When I bothered what present is good,and if she is pleased with.

  • When I was wondering what present was good,and if she would be pleased with it...

 
  • the day passed.

  • the day had already passed.

 
  • I decided to send light pink hydrangea for my mother.

  • I decided to send a light pink hydrangea to my mother.

 
  • It begin the rainy season on June in Japan.

  • It starts blossoming during the rainy season that starts in June in Japan.

 
  • I think the hydrangea match rainy season and It will bossom beaty from now.

  • I think the hydrangea match the rainy season and It will blossom better from now on than at the time of mother's day.

    I assumed that was what you meant.

 
Hi nikoniko, I discovered hydrangeas and their meaning for the japanese rainy season through your essay. Then I researched online and found this : http://modernnipponproject.com/en/seasonal-fragrance/61-ajisai
Good luck in your study of english. If you'd like to learn french I can also help you ^^.
May 24th 2012 01:28 nikoniko
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  • Last Sanday,I sent a present to my mother for Mother's day, but I was one week late.

    In english, you can't say : "Mother's day of one week late", you have to separate the elements even though they are related.

    suggestion : even though I was one week late.

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Thank you so much.
I'm glad to know the idea that I have to separate the elements.
May 24th 2012 02:03 nikoniko
Thank you for the correction,and researching online.
I'm happy. Hydrangea are many different types. Most of them are pale color and beautiful.
I have been to Paris once. Pari is wonderful city. I want to go again.
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