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My daughter took a substitute day for her school trip the other day and my husband happened to take a day off.
So we went to a western-style restaurant to eat lunch.
She ordered a stewed hamburger with demi-glace sauce, its flavor and color were rich.
He had a pork cutlet, its counting was crispy, with rice, salad, and soup.
I had a minced meat cutlet (menchi katsu), which was succulent (juicy?), and rice.
I think it's one of the perfect accompaniments to cooked rice.
So we went to a western-style restaurant to eat lunch.
She ordered a stewed hamburger with demi-glace sauce, its flavor and color were rich.
He had a pork cutlet, its counting was crispy, with rice, salad, and soup.
I had a minced meat cutlet (menchi katsu), which was succulent (juicy?), and rice.
I think it's one of the perfect accompaniments to cooked rice.
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My daughter took a substitute day for her school trip the other day and my husband happened to take a day off.
What's a substitute day? That sentence should be valid, but I don't know what your daughter did. Substitution means having one thing in place of another.
So, we went to a western-style restaurant to eat lunch.
"So" is a conjunction, so I added a comma.
She ordered a stewed hamburger with demi-glace sauce. Its flavor and color were rich.
These are separate sentences.
He had a pork cutlet. It counting was crispy and came with rice, salad, and soup.
What is a counting? Counting means adding up numbers. The list sounds best in its own sentence, so I added a verb (came). The noun "it" carries over the conjunction, so there is no comma.
I had rice and a succulent (juicy?) minced meat cutlet (menchi katsu), which was succulent (juicy?), and rice.
In a list, put the least amount of information in front. "Rice" lacks a description, so say that first. Succulent is a more powerful version of juicy. You can say either one. I have restructured the sentence to say succulent as an adjective instead of inside of a prepositional phrase. It's less to say and easier to digest like that (pun not intended).
"He had a fried pork cutlet. Its skin was crispy and came with rice, salad, and soup."
A school trip is called a field trip. On days when you do not go to school at all, it is called a holiday or "a day off". However, she still went to school, so it was still considered a school day despite her break from her studies.
"My daughter had a field trip the other day and my husband happened to take a day off."