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Hello, I'm Natsuki.
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I wrote about a relationship(similarities) between Beat Generation and bebop jazz for my English homework.
Could you correct my English grammar? It's not long!
Please ask me if you have any questions.
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Not like other music, bebop jazz is very free-styled as there is no ‘fixed’ music score. Because of the invention of the techniques like improvisation, the music differs every time it’s played, meaning musicians can express their feelings in any way they want. Also, the bebop jazz has long solos which represent the musician’s desire for freedom and the society which others don’t interfere.
I believe the style of bebop is very similar to the Beats’ ideal way of life. They had questions about the old (stereotyped) way of life and the social rules that people had to follow. Therefore, the style of bebop, which emphasized freedom and individuality, attracted many beats.
Thank you very much for reading this :)
I wrote about a relationship(similarities) between Beat Generation and bebop jazz for my English homework.
Could you correct my English grammar? It's not long!
Please ask me if you have any questions.
Thank you :)
↓ ↓ ↓
Not like other music, bebop jazz is very free-styled as there is no ‘fixed’ music score. Because of the invention of the techniques like improvisation, the music differs every time it’s played, meaning musicians can express their feelings in any way they want. Also, the bebop jazz has long solos which represent the musician’s desire for freedom and the society which others don’t interfere.
I believe the style of bebop is very similar to the Beats’ ideal way of life. They had questions about the old (stereotyped) way of life and the social rules that people had to follow. Therefore, the style of bebop, which emphasized freedom and individuality, attracted many beats.
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Because of the invention of the techniques like improvisation, the music differs every time it’s played, meaning musicians can express their feelings in any way they want.
The invention (of what?) --> of techniques. No "the" needed!
Also, the bebop jazz has long solos which represent the musician’ss' desire for freedom and the society which others don’t interfere.a society without interference from others
Musician's = Musician is. ex.: The musician's great.
Musicians' = Musicianの. ex.: Meet me in the musicians' lodge.
Both questioned (They had questions about) the old (stereotyped) way of life and the social rules that people had to follow.
People have questions but both style (art, etc.) and people can question something. "that" is implied by "had to follow".
Good work! I thought they were called Beatniks or Beat Poets or Beat Artists, not just "Beats". 英語が得意ですね。