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May 22nd 2012 09:48
It is the second day after my joining into Lang-8, such a warm familiy. I like here, because I can use English freely and there is always a warm-hearted gentleman/lady who can help me correct my articles.
I am a petroleum engineer in China currently, but it may be not sure for me to be an engineer in the future, coz that engineer need a lot of mathmatic knowledge, while my math is just a disaster which ruin my college. So I am learning English and wish that one day I can go abroad and find another job such as a trader or else, but not engineer angain.
Huh, the fact now is that I am still an engineer, and have to make a living on it. But when it come to the future, who can ensure what I will be?
Please allow me to say, good luck for every one who have dreams!
Eefara
Thank you for your correction!
May 22nd 2012 10:02
  • It is the second day after my joining into Lang-8, such a warm familiy.

  • It is the second day after my joining into Lang-8; it's such a warm family.

 
  • I like here, because I can use English freely and there is always a warm-hearted gentleman/lady who can help me correct my articles.

  • I like it here, because I can use English freely and there is always a warm hearted gentleman/lady who can help me correct my articles.

 
  • I am a petroleum engineer in China currently, but it may be not sure for me to be an engineer in the future, coz that engineer need a lot of mathmatic knowledge, while my math is just a disaster which ruin my college.

  • I am currently a petroleum engineer in China currently, but it I may not be not sure for me to be an engineer in the future, coz that engineers need a lot of mathematical knowledge, while my math is just a disaster, which ruined my college (grades?).

 
  • So I am learning English and wish that one day I can go abroad and find another job such as a trader or else, but not engineer angain.

  • So I am learning English and wish that one day I can go abroad and find another job such as a trader or something else, but not as an engineer again.

 
  • But when it come to the future, who can ensure what I will be?

  • But when it come to the future, who can ensure tell what I will be?

 
  • Please allow me to say, good luck for every one who have dreams!

  • Please allow me to say, good luck for everyone who has dreams!

 
Good luck with your goal! I just found Lang-8 recently, and it is a fantastic community.
May 22nd 2012 10:04 momo
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  • I am currently a petroleum engineer in China currently, but it I may not be not sure for me to be an engineer in the future, coz that engineers need a lot of mathematical knowledge, while my math is just a disaster, which ruined my college (grades?).

”
yep, grades！ 囧
May 22nd 2012 10:05 momo
Thank you for your correction!:)
May 22nd 2012 10:13 Eefara
No problem. :)
mikazukipie
Thank you for your correction!
May 22nd 2012 10:06
  • 5/22 rainy maybe

  • 5/22 A Chance of Rain

 
  • It is the second day after my joining into Lang-8, such a warm familiy.

  • I joined Lang-8 two days ago. It's such a warm family.

 
  • I like here, because I can use English freely and there is always a warm-hearted gentleman/lady who can help me correct my articles.

  • I like it here, because I can use English freely and there is always a warm-hearted gentleman/lady who can help me correct my articles entries.

    "Articles" are in newspapers. "Entry" is usually used for diaries/journals.

 
  • I am a petroleum engineer in China currently, but it may be not sure for me to be an engineer in the future, coz that engineer need a lot of mathmatic knowledge, while my math is just a disaster which ruin my college.

  • I am a petroleum engineer in China currently, but I may not be an engineer in the future, because engineers need a lot of mathematic knowledge, while my math is just a disaster which ruined my college grades/record/experience.

 
  • So I am learning English and wish that one day I can go abroad and find another job such as a trader or else, but not engineer angain.

  • So I am learning English and hope that one day I can go abroad and find another job like a trader or else, but I don't want to be an engineer again.

    What kind of trader? Stock?

 
  • Huh, the fact now is that I am still an engineer, and have to make a living on it.

  • The fact is that I am still an engineer, and have to make a living on it.

 
  • But when it come to the future, who can ensure what I will be?

  • But when it comes to the future, who knows what I will be?

 
  • Please allow me to say, good luck for every one who have dreams!

  • Please allow me to say good luck to everyone who has dreams!

    "everyone" is a singular noun, and uses the third person singular for verbs.

    Everyone eats pizza = O
    Everyone eat pizza = X

 
May 22nd 2012 10:10 momo
“

  • So I am learning English and hope that one day I can go abroad and find another job like a trader or else, but I don't want to be an engineer again.

    What kind of trader? Stock?

”
stock? maybe, it is still in the sky,so I can not tell you anything.
May 22nd 2012 10:12 momo
“

  • I like it here, because I can use English freely and there is always a warm-hearted gentleman/lady who can help me correct my articles entries.

    "Articles" are in newspapers. "Entry" is usually used for diaries/journals.

”
oh, that is kind of you. I learned a lot from your correction:)
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