First impression about America :)
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One of the big reason why I like America life style is that I can live with a nature.
Back in Korea, there are only asphalt free way and skycraper. The only place people can run is a gym. But in America, there are a lot of people who run around.
Well another thing is...........that it is first time to see chipmuck and deer!!
When I saw deer first time, I can't believe what I see :)
People are friendly ..(whenever catch the other's eyes, they initiate the conversation)
When one girl said hello with smile, I flattered myself by thinking she likes me !!....
Back in Korea, there are only asphalt free way and skycraper. The only place people can run is a gym. But in America, there are a lot of people who run around.
Well another thing is...........that it is first time to see chipmuck and deer!!
When I saw deer first time, I can't believe what I see :)
People are friendly ..(whenever catch the other's eyes, they initiate the conversation)
When one girl said hello with smile, I flattered myself by thinking she likes me !!....
One of the big reasons why I like America life style [or, American lifestyle] is that I can live with a nature.
Back in Korea, there are only asphalt freeways and skyscrapers.
The only place people can run in is a gym.
But in America, there are a lot of people who run around outside.
Well, another thing is........... Well, another reason that I like America is that...
that it is first time to see chipmunk and deer!! I can also see chipmunks and deers! / it is my first time seeing chipmunks and deers!
Although it depends on what part of America you live in. Some parts of America even see snakes!!
When I saw a deer for first time, I can't couldn't believe what I see saw :)
People are friendly ..(whenever catch the other's eyes we meet eyes, they initiate the conversation)
When one girl said hello [or, when one girl greeted me] with a smile, I flattered myself by thinking that she likes me !!....
The only place people can run is at a gym.
Usually with "run" we use "at" when we are using it for exercise.
Another thing is that it is the first time I have seen chipmunks and deer!
that it is first time to see chipmuck and deer!!
When I saw a deer for the first time, I can't couldn't believe what I see my eyes. :)
"I couldn't believe my eyes," is an idiomatic expression that's worth learning. It means exactly what you are trying to say.
People are friendly. Whenever we catch the other's their eyes meet, they initiate the a conversation.
"to catch one's eyes" means you saw something interesting that made you keep looking at it. "I was walking on the street and a quarter caught my eyes."
Once when one a girl said hello with smile smiled and said, "Hello," to me, I flattered myself by thinking she liked me!
I might also recommend not splitting the infinitive, though it is fairly common nowadays: "ever to see" rather than "to ever see". I believe it is still considered a better choice in writing.
My First Impression(s) of America <<<< 제목에 모든 중요한 단어의 첫 문자를 항상 대문자로 써야 돼요. 항상.
One of the big reason why I like the America lifestyle is that I can live close to nature.
Where I live in Korea, I see only asphalt freeways and skycrapers. << 하나 이상 볼 수 있죠? ㅎㅎ
The only place people can run is at/in a gym.
But However in America a lot of people jog (run/exercise) outside.문어체 영어 문장에 시작부분에 그 단어를 "so, but, and & or" 쓰지 마세요. 그들은 접속사예요. 그들만 문장의 두 부분들을 연결한다.
I also saw my first chipmunk and my first deer!
that it is first time to see chipmuck and deer!!
When I saw a deer for the first time, I couldn't believe what I saw. :)실 생활에서,영어의 문어체에 위한 (인터네트에 아닌)우리는 이모티콘은을 사용하지 않아요. 여기 그걸 쓰지 마세요.
People are friendly ..(whenever you catch someone else's eye, they initiate the (a) conversation) /// they start talking to you.
When one girl said hello and smiled at me, I pretended that she liked me. ㅎㅎ 꿈 깨!
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