A text in past. Titanic

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May 22, 2012 01:16
Today, it´s time to practice the past tenses. Then I have decided to talk about Titanic, a historical event more talked in the actuallity for your 100 aniversary.

People knows the history of Titanic normally for the movie that James Cameron done. The movie relates very well how it was the fact, but it have some errors such as the people aren't can so time in the cold water.

The oficial version of the history was Titanic crased with a iceberg, but a new informations says it has found holes in the ship to come of inside of Titanic. A teory that I have heard says The Titanic was transporting England gold to USA, so England could buy arms to the world War. Germany could have discovered the business and they decided to sink the ship.

It's interesting really?
Anamsc
May 22, 2012 03:45
  • Then I have decided to talk about Titanic, a historical event more talked in the actuallity for your 100 aniversary.

  • Then I have decided to talk about Titanic, a historical event more talked in the actuallity for your 100 aniversary.a historical event being talked about right now because if its 100th anniversary.

    I'm not sure what you mean in this sentence.

 
  • People knows the history of Titanic normally for the movie that James Cameron done.

  • People knows the history of Titanic normally for because of the movie that James Cameron done did.

    "People" is plural, so it must be "people know" (not knowS).
    The past tense of "do" is "did". "Done" is the past participle.

 
  • The movie relates very well how it was the fact, but it have some errors such as the people aren't can so time in the cold water.

  • The movie relates explains very well how it was the fact the event was, but it have has some errors such as the people aren't can can't be so much time in the cold water.

    "Relate" = relacionar

 
  • The oficial version of the history was Titanic crased with a iceberg, but a new informations says it has found holes in the ship to come of inside of Titanic.

  • The oficial version of the history was Titanic crashed with into an iceberg, but a new informations says it has found holes in the ship to that come of from inside of Titanic.

    "Information" is uncountable.

 
  • A teory that I have heard says The Titanic was transporting England gold to USA, so England could buy arms to the world War.

  • A theory that I have heard says The Titanic was transporting England (English) gold to the USA, so England could buy arms to for the world War.

 

Wow, that's very interesting! I never knew all of that about the Titanic.

By the way, your past tense is very good. Let me know if you have any questions.

May 22, 2012 17:25 AlbertoJ
Thanks Anamsc, your correction is very well!

I have seen documentarys about Titanic more interesants, but this theory is the most interesting
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