作文練習その1 Training of Writing,vol.1
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こんにちは。作文の練習です。お時間あれば添削お願いします。
Hi there. It's just a training of writing. Please correct sentences below if you have time.
肘の内側が汗でひりひりして痒い。
#1 Inside of my elbow is irritating and itchy by sweat.
#2 I feel itchy and irritation on inside of my elbow because of sweat.
足首を虫に刺されてそこが赤くはれている。
I was bitten by insects on my ankle and it is reddish and swelling.
昼ご飯を食べに行こうと思ったが暑すぎてやめた。
I was going to go out for lunch, but I quit it because it was too hot outside.
膝をすりむいて、傷が泥で汚れている。
I got a scratch on my knee and it has gotten dirty with dirt.
夕食が不要だと妻にメールした。
I send my wife a mail saying I don't need dinner.
同僚が自分の畑で採れたトウモロコシを持ってきた。
My co-worker brought some corn he took on his field.
Hi there. It's just a training of writing. Please correct sentences below if you have time.
肘の内側が汗でひりひりして痒い。
#1 Inside of my elbow is irritating and itchy by sweat.
#2 I feel itchy and irritation on inside of my elbow because of sweat.
足首を虫に刺されてそこが赤くはれている。
I was bitten by insects on my ankle and it is reddish and swelling.
昼ご飯を食べに行こうと思ったが暑すぎてやめた。
I was going to go out for lunch, but I quit it because it was too hot outside.
膝をすりむいて、傷が泥で汚れている。
I got a scratch on my knee and it has gotten dirty with dirt.
夕食が不要だと妻にメールした。
I send my wife a mail saying I don't need dinner.
同僚が自分の畑で採れたトウモロコシを持ってきた。
My co-worker brought some corn he took on his field.

I'm just practicing my writing.
Please correct the sentences below if you have time.
#1 The inside area of my elbow feels irritated and itchy due to sweat.
#2 I feel an itchiness and irritation on the inside of my elbow because of/due to sweat.
My ankle was bitten by insects and it's become red and swollen.
I was going to go out for lunch, but I didn't because it was too hot outside.
I got a scratch on my knee and it has gotten dirty.
I sent my wife an email saying I won't eat dinner.
My co-worker brought some corn he picked from his field.