Finally, I had got to YOSEMITE!!

FYoseminally,te I had got lasto YOSEMITE!!

3 days ago, I left San francisco for Yosemite Nnational Ppark.

I took a midnight Ggreyhound bus.

I was sleeping deeply, and when I waoked up, we were at the somewhere bus station.

Then I asked anthe other passenger, "Is this is Merced?"

Merced, theis nearest city to Yosemite, was where I was supposed to get off.

He answered, "Tthis is Modesto."

Because of my disability of listening in English, I mistook "Modesto" for "Merced" and immediately got off the bus.

I got off in a rash moment.

Connect the last two sentences.

Modesto is a 40 miles western city fromf Merced.

Actually, I hadidn't know therver is a city like theat around of Merceodesto.

I waited five hours for the next bus at Modesto for 5 hours.

At tWhen I atrrived atim Me,rced I could tcaketch the last Yarts bus, which takes me to Yosemite from Merced.

Your reader probably doesn't know what YARTS means.

HThe bus I took at Modesto, however, my bus was behind a schedule and I just missed the Yosemite bus by five minutes.

When I arrived at Merced, the bus I was supposed to take had left just that time.

If the bus had arrived five minutes earlier, I'd not have miss that.

Combine the last three sentences. It's simpler and more natural sounding.

And yesterday, I took the earliest Yarts bus in the morning.

Finally, I had got to Yosemite.

MyThe next destination is Seattle via Salt Llake Ccity and Portland.

Finally, I had got to YOSEMITE!! Finally, I have reached Yosemite!!

I was sleeping deeply, and when I waked woke up, we were at the somewhere a bus station somewhere.

Actually, I didn't know hadn't known there is a city like that around Merced. named Modesto near Merced.