I am Christian.
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I am Christian. So I had going to Church every Sunday even though I live in other Country.
but I didn't go to Church last Sunday. To go Church is so far from my home. Maybe take time is about 1 hour 40 minut.
So I had trying to found Korean Church near my home at Shan Sia(三峽) in Taiwan,
because I Just heard that there is a Church in Shan Sia(三峽), but I can't found it. help me.. pls..
I worshiped through internet Korea Church web. I think To worship into internet is not good.
If There is no a Church, It can't be helped. but,There is.. I should go to Church in spite of far.
I think It is really(alive or live??) a Christian.
but I didn't go to Church last Sunday. To go Church is so far from my home. Maybe take time is about 1 hour 40 minut.
So I had trying to found Korean Church near my home at Shan Sia(三峽) in Taiwan,
because I Just heard that there is a Church in Shan Sia(三峽), but I can't found it. help me.. pls..
I worshiped through internet Korea Church web. I think To worship into internet is not good.
If There is no a Church, It can't be helped. but,There is.. I should go to Church in spite of far.
I think It is really(alive or live??) a Christian.

So I had going go to Church every Sunday even though I live in other Country.
To go the Church is so far from my home.
So I had been trying to find found Korean Church near my home at Shan Sia(三峽) in Taiwan,
I worshiped through the internet Korea Church website.
I think To worship into by internet is not good.
but,There is no other way to worship..
I should go to Church in spite of long distance.
I think It is genuine really(alive or live??) a Christian.
Thank you!! Your English is good!! I still not good at English, so I need your help. Give me some advice Whenever I get a wrong words.
저는 그냥 제가 아는데로 수정해드릴 뿐이에요..
저도 영어 잘 못해요...
앞으로 한국어도 잘 부탁드립니다.^^
좋은 하루 보내세요.
I am Christian.
I am Christian.
So so I had go going to Church every Sunday even though I live in other Country country.
However, but I didn't go to Church last Sunday.
To go The Church is so far from my home.
Maybe it take takes time is about 1 hour to 40 minut minutes to go there.
So I had been had trying to found find a Korean Church near my home at Shan Sia(三峽) in Taiwan.
because I just Just heard that there is a Church in Shan Sia(三峽), but I can't find found it.
Help help me please.
pls..
I worshiped through internet via Korea Church website.
I think that to To worship through the into internet is not good.
If there There is no a Church, it It can't be helped.
so but,There there is no other way to worship
I should go to Church in spite of it being far.
I think that is It is really how to live (alive or live??) the life of a Christian.
God bless you!!
I am a Christian.
Many English speakers say "I am Christian," but it is not correct. "I am Christian" means that your name is Christian.
I am a Christian, so I had going to have to go to church every Sunday, even though I live in another country.
It sounds more natural to make these into one sentence separated with a comma.
"Church" and "country" are not a proper nouns, so they are only capitalized if they are at the beginning of a sentence.
but However, I didn't go to church last Sunday.
In English, we don't start sentences with "and", "but", or "or". Many English speakers break this rule, but it is wrong.
To go The church is so far from my home.
Maybe It might take time is about 1 one hour and 40 minutes to get there.
I'm not sure if you mean 1 hour + 40 minutes or if you mean 40 minutes to 1 hour.
If you mean that it could take 40 minutes OR an hour, you put the smaller amount of time (40 minutes) first, with the word "to" in the middle. "It might take about 40 minutes to 1 hour to get there."
If you are writing a number that is smaller than ten (10), it is better to spell the number. If the number is bigger than ten, it is usually okay to use numbers.
So I had trying to found tried to find a Korean Church near my home at in Shan Sia (三峽) in Taiwan,
I changed "had trying to found" to "tried to find" to make the tense correct.
In English, when we say you live at a particular city, we say that we live "in" that city.
because I just heard that there is a Church in Shan Sia(三峽). but However, I can't found haven't found it.
I think it sounds more natural to make a new sentence after Shan Sia. Because we cant' start a new sentence with "but", I changed it to "however".
"Can't" is short for "can not", which is present tense. I changed it to "haven't", which is past-tense.
Help me, please.
"pls" is an internet abbreviation for "please".
It makes more sense to make "help me, please" into one sentence, instead of two.
pls..
I worshiped through the internet Korea Church website.
Since you are now talking about what is happening in the present, I changed "worshipped" to present-tense "worship".
"Website" implies that you are on the internet, so you don't actually need the word "internet".
I think To worship into internet is not good.
I think one of these two sentences would sound more natural:
"I don't think it is good to worship over the internet."
"I think that worshipping over the internet is not good."
However, if there is no a Church, it can't be helped.
I think it sounds more natural to start the sentence with "however", because you are contrasting this sentence with the one before it.
but,There is..
I think it would sound better to put this sentence and the next sentence together like this:
"Since there is a church, I should go to it, even though it is far away."
I think It is really(alive or live??) a Christian.
I think one of these sentences would sound better:
"I think this is how a Christian really lives."
"I think this is really how a Christian lives."
"I think this is really how to live the life of a Christian."