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She couldn't understand why she had to accept all this tragedy.
After she woke up, she did what she should do. That's all.
Was there probably problem while taking a shower?-she changed her bodywasher- or it could be a breakfast because she ate it today. Usually, she skips her meals in the morning.
Eyes were opened and closed again. But nothing changed. Her room still looked like the Hell which she never could imagine. Lights blinked with a white Color to a black one and than to a red one again. Sounds those came from outside and inside from her were worst. Sometimes was someone shouting or screaming with fear and madness. Otherwise, was the others whispering in unrecognizable Language.
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I wrote a short story cause it ist boring to write a diary. If i have so many mistakes, could you just let me know?
After she woke up, she did what she should do. That's all.
Was there probably problem while taking a shower?-she changed her bodywasher- or it could be a breakfast because she ate it today. Usually, she skips her meals in the morning.
Eyes were opened and closed again. But nothing changed. Her room still looked like the Hell which she never could imagine. Lights blinked with a white Color to a black one and than to a red one again. Sounds those came from outside and inside from her were worst. Sometimes was someone shouting or screaming with fear and madness. Otherwise, was the others whispering in unrecognizable Language.
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I wrote a short story cause it ist boring to write a diary. If i have so many mistakes, could you just let me know?
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After she woke up, she did what she should do., and that was all.
That's all.
Was there probably problem while taking a shower? (She changed her bodywasher.) Or it could be a breakfast, because she ate it today.
Her eyes were opened and closed again.
Lights blinked with a from white Color to a black, one and than then to a red one again.
Lights blinked from white to black, and then to red.
When mentioning colors, it is not necessary to say 'color'.
'Than' is used for comparison, while 'then' is used to indicate order. white then black then red
Sounds those that came from outside and inside from of her were the worst.
Sometimes was someone was shouting or screaming with fear and madness.
OtherwiseOther times, was the others were whispering in an unrecognizable language.
I wrote a short story because it is boring to write a diary.
If i have so there are many mistakes, could you just let me know?
Was there a probably problem while taking a shower?-she changed her bodywasher- or it could be a breakfast because she ate it today.