[061] Tom's Missing The Real Experience

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Dec 21, 2012 21:05 exlang-correctionplea
Would you mind correcting this passage?
I'd appreciate your support!

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Tom is enjoying a book about UFOs. Surprisingly, behind him, outside the window, a real UFO is flying! His sister has found it and tells it to him, but he is so absorbed in his book that he doesn’t take any notice. What an irony to be denied that rare chance by a fictional UFO!
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