[058] Time & Money or Independence

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Nov 29, 2012 19:06 exlang-correctionplea
I've written about whether I would choose to stay home or live by myself if I were to enter college where it takes two hours to go (by the way, it's not an actual case with me).
Would you mind correcting these?
I'd appreciate your support.


(A) I would choose not to live by myself. It is true it takes a lot of time to commute, but it’s not so much of a problem if you spend that time reading or doing some task. Besides, I don’t need extra money or energy to spare to live on my own.

(B) I would choose to live alone, because two hours of commuting is too long for me. I’m not the kind who makes an efficient use of time in the train. Moreover, I think it’s a great chance to be independent of your parents when you enter college.