[058] Time & Money or Independence

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Nov 29, 2012 19:06 exlang-correctionplea
I've written about whether I would choose to stay home or live by myself if I were to enter college where it takes two hours to go (by the way, it's not an actual case with me).
Would you mind correcting these?
I'd appreciate your support.

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(A) I would choose not to live by myself. It is true it takes a lot of time to commute, but it’s not so much of a problem if you spend that time reading or doing some task. Besides, I don’t need extra money or energy to spare to live on my own.

(B) I would choose to live alone, because two hours of commuting is too long for me. I’m not the kind who makes an efficient use of time in the train. Moreover, I think it’s a great chance to be independent of your parents when you enter college.