[048] The Real Reason For Her Loss

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Sep 27, 2012 19:31 exlang-correctionplea
Would you mind correcting this passage?
I'd appreciate your support.

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Cate and Jessy have just watched their friend Mary lose a tennis match. Cate is surprised by the match results, whereas Jessy isn't. On their way home they are discussing their different opinions.

Cate "Too bad Mary lost. Normally she's an excellent player, but today she seemed to be in bad condition.
Jessy "Oh, I don't think that's the real reason she lost. Just last month she got injured in the foot because of a car accident. So she hadn't prepared fully enough for today's game. And, of course, if a tennis player doesn't do that, she's in trouble."