[044] Susan's Bad Day

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Sep 14, 2012 18:07 exlang-correctionplea
Would you mind correcting this short passage?
I'd appreciate your help.


Susan's father was reading a newspaper when he noticed her happily getting ready to go out, so he asked her where she was going. She answered that she was visiting Tokyo Sky Tree, a new and the tallest building in Tokyo, and going around in Asakusa with her friends.
That night, when she came home, she looked so upset. Her father asked her what was the matter. Then she said many bad things happened. One of her friends couldn't come because of illness, another had her purse stolen, and what was worse, the restaurant they had decided to go beforehand just happened to be closed that day.