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Jul 03rd 2012 12:28 exlang-correctionplea
"I'm exhausted today. On the train I got so sleepy that I couldn't keep my eyes open. I think I'll get vitamin injected. If so, I can get rid of my fatigue."


Would you mind correcting this sentence?
Thank you very much in advance.
tony
Thank you for your correction!
Jul 03rd 2012 12:37
  • I think I'll get vitamin injected.

  • I think I'll get a vitamin injection.

 
  • If so, I can get rid of my fatigue."

  • If so, I can get rid of my fatigue." [More natural: I think I'll get a vitamin injection for my fatigue.]

 
Jul 06th 2012 01:53 Ex_Lang
Thank you so much!
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