Thank you for everyone!

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May 7, 2012 23:46
今日はつかれたので、一休みします。
Today I take a little rest, because I am tired.

でも、毎日書くと決めたので、とりあえずこうやって書いています。
Though, since I decided to write my journal ever day, I am just writing this.

皆さんの添削のお陰で、今までしらなかった英語での書き方をいっぱい知ることができました。
Thanks to every one's corrections, I could know a lot of the way of writing in English that I haven't ever known.

本当に有難うございます。
Thank you very much.

これからもよろしくお願い致します。
Please correct my journals in future too.
akimtda
May 8, 2012 00:02
  • Today I take a little rest, because I am tired.

  • Today I took a little rest, because I was tired.

 
  • Though, since I decided to write my journal ever day, I am just writing this.

  • Though, since I decided to write my journal everyday, I am just writing this.

    Perfect use of "though"!

 
  • Thanks to every one's corrections, I could know a lot of the way of writing in English that I haven't ever known.

  • Thanks to every one's corrections, I could now know a lot more of about the way of writing in English than I have ever known before.

    a more natural way of saying this would be "Thank's to everyone's corrections, I now know more than I have before about how to write in English."

 
  • Please correct my journals in future too.

  • Please correct my journals in the future too.

 

Good job! :)

がんばって！

akimtda
May 8, 2012 00:18
  • Thank you for everyone!

  • Thank you for to everyone!

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Missed this one earlier, my bad.

May 8, 2012 06:43 abocabo
Thank you for your corrections every time. I was thinking this journal had no mistake, because there were not a lot of sentences, but they were corrected by you. I have to study more!
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