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①The last time I felt surprised was about one month ago.
When I took the TOEIC test,I was depressed because it was too difficult to answer.
Two days later,I checked my class on a bulletin board with a depressed feeling.
Then I felt surprised because my class was A1(the highest class)!
English is my weak subject and course work is harder than I expected,but I will study harder and harder.
I want to study abroad to learn foreign countries' cultures.
②The last time I felt sad was at my grandmother's funeral.
My 88-year-old grandmother died.
I received affection from her.
She suffered from dementia since I was elementary school student.
She gradually forgot things a lot.
Finally,she forgot me.
I seldom met her,so I regret now.
I will offer incense sticks every day before I go to school.
③The last time I felt happy was at my house.
I have a hamster which was named "Maru-chan."
He looks like Okada Masaki,a Japanese actor.
One day,he abruptly disappeared.
My family searched as if our life depended on it,but he didn't appear that day.
I was discouraged not to find him.
The following day,I heard something in my room.
I searched high and low.
Eventually,he got between the sheets in my closet.
I will devote a lot attention to him.
English is my weakest subject and course work is harder than I expected,but I will study harder and harder.
if it is not your weakest, you can say it is my weakness or something along those lines.
I seldom met her and I regret it now.
I was discouraged not to find him.
This is a rather ambiguous statement; it is a double negative. I am unsure what you are trying to say in this sentence. Were you disheartened that you wouldn't find him? I'm assuming this is so from the previous statements...
Discouraged is not a word I would associate with losing something... please clarify. :)
Hello there! Thank you for sharing these three emotions! I'm just commenting to say that you are pretty proficient in the English language, and I am glad that you passed your exam. It shows that you have a good grasp of the language and have been rewarded, rightfully so, with a slot in the highest class! :)
There just needs to be a bit of tweaking here and there but overall, you're English is very good. I hope I have been helpful to you. :)
I wish you the best for your future and your English.