Have you had a nightmare before :(?

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Apr 27, 2012 20:57
Many people are troubled by nightmares. Nightmares reduce their quality of sleep. Nightmare are caused by watching thrillers or having problems and being stressed during the day. Incorrect sleeping posture can also cause nightmares.Nightmares are easily caused by sleeping on your stomach or having your heart oppressed .Also,being sick can probably cause nightmare too.
We can avoid nightmares by watching and reading relaxed and happy books or videos instead of trillers and ghost stories.In addition,don't use your brain too much before going to bed.
(Information from websites :) )
Reqeka
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 27, 2012 23:25
  • Did you have a nightmare before :(?

  • Have you had a nightmare before :(?

    use present perfect to talk about experiences at an indefinite time in the past - check #6 - http://www.eslbase.com/grammar/present-perfect-simple

 
  • Many people are troubled about nightmare.

  • Many people are troubled by nightmares.

 
  • Nightmare reduces their quality of sleeping.

  • Nightmares reduces their quality of sleeping.

 
  • Nightmare is caused because of watching thrillers or having some unhappy things during the daytime.

  • Nightmares are caused by watching thrillers or having problems and being stressed during the daytime

 
  • Nightmare is caused because of watching thrillers or having some unhappy things during the daytime.

  • Nightmares are caused by watching thrillers or

 
  • Nightmare is caused because of watching thrillers or having some unhappy things during the daytime.

  • problems and being stressed during the daytime

 
  • Incorrect sleeping posture can also cause nightmare.

  • Incorrect sleeping posture can also cause nightmares.

 
  • Tummy sleeping or something oppresses the heart,in such condition,nightmare may be easily caused.

  • Nightmares are easily caused by sleeping on your stomach or having your heart oppressed.

 
  • Tummy sleeping or something oppresses the heart,in such condition,nightmare may be easily caused.

  • Nightmares are easily caused by sleeping on your stomach or having your heart oppressed.

 
  • Besides, having sickness can probably get nightmare.

  • Being sick can probably cause nightmares too.

 
  • We can watch such healthy and beneficial,relaxed and happy books or videos,reduce watching trillers or ghost stories.

  • We can avoid nightmares by watching and reading relaxed and happy books or videos instead of trillers and ghost stories.

 

I like your text!

Apr 28, 2012 11:56 Cyrena:)
I post this text because I had an nightmare yesterday~ ;)
Although my grammar is poor, I want to let others to know more about nightmare! :D

Apr 28, 2012 19:22 Reqeka
It's a good text, the red corrections are for grammar, the blue are to make it sound more natural. Keep writing, read books and watch movies, your English will improve much faster :)

Apr 28, 2012 21:49 Cyrena:)
Thank for your advice ;)
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