i dont know why?
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I always feel that there are few people to come here to revise your entries.am i think about it to much? I dont know.
i can find a lot of people to learn japanese and english,even the chinese.but the qulity of revise always few.
i dont know why.if anybody to tell me the reason?
haha...i just say something what i felt.Do you know that,if you write the entries,but there is nobody to revise it ,how your feeling?
you dont know what mistake you made,which sentenses or words are incorrect,and how to use the correct grammar.
so ...
hehe...sometimes you gonna lose confident to write the entres.
i hope i am not .
i can find a lot of people to learn japanese and english,even the chinese.but the qulity of revise always few.
i dont know why.if anybody to tell me the reason?
haha...i just say something what i felt.Do you know that,if you write the entries,but there is nobody to revise it ,how your feeling?
you dont know what mistake you made,which sentenses or words are incorrect,and how to use the correct grammar.
so ...
hehe...sometimes you gonna lose confident to write the entres.
i hope i am not .

am i thinking about it to much?
i can find a lot of people to learn japanese and english,even the chinese.
but the qulity of revisions are always few.
can anybody to tell me the reason?
i am just say something what i feel.
Do you know that If you write the wrote entries, but there is nobody there to revise it, how would your feeling?
suggestion: "If you wrote entries, and there is no one there to revise it, how would you feel?"
you dont know what mistake[s] you made,which senten[c]es or words are incorrect,and how to use the correct grammar.
sometimes you are gonna lose confident to write the entres.
i don't know why?
I would be sure to use the apostrophe.
I always feel that there are only a few people to come here to revise your entries.
Since the "few people" is a bad thing, I'd say "only a" to help make clear the negative import. I think the original might be fine, though, too.
You could say, "a few people who come here". The clause "come here" is restricting the noun, so it needs a "who" to introduce it. Otherwise, it sounds like there are only a few people who exist, or something like that.
am i thinking about it too much?
I'm not sure what this sentence is intended to mean. Did you mean, "Am I worrying about it too much"?
i can find a lot of people trying to learn japanese and english, even the chinese.
but the number of revisions always is small.
I would make this part of the previous sentence.
Did you mean, "the quality of the revisions is always low".
i just am saying something what i feel.
You need the "am saying" tense since you're in the process of doing that.
Do you know how you'd feel if you wrote entries, but no one revised them?
This might be what you meant?
you dont know what mistakes you made, which sentences or words are incorrect, or how to use the correct grammar.
Usually, I think, "or" is used with negative verbs. It indicates that you don't know any of the items in the list, in this case. Using "and" is a bit specialized. It could be used, but it means you don't know at least one of the items in the list. I'd probably replace the last item with "or whether you used correct grammar", to match the other items in the list.
"Grammar" doesn't get an article in this case. It would if you're talking about "the grammar of Chinese" because you're talking about the whole grammar, which is a definite singular thing.
sometimes you lose confidence after your write some entries and don't receive any responses.
This might be what you meant. I am not sure.
i hope i am not .
I'm not sure what this sentence should be because I didn't quite get the last entry.