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I would like to write an essey below on Facebook.
Please correct my sentences.
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"LABYRINTH"-Ravensburger
This is the treasure hanting game in a maze made by some pieces of cards.
Players slide the cards which has each shape of path and move their pieces to reach there objective treasures disturbing other players routes.
It's very fun but be careful.
Sometimes it makes an awkward atmosphere because of other players nastiness.
Please correct my sentences.
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"LABYRINTH"-Ravensburger
This is the treasure hanting game in a maze made by some pieces of cards.
Players slide the cards which has each shape of path and move their pieces to reach there objective treasures disturbing other players routes.
It's very fun but be careful.
Sometimes it makes an awkward atmosphere because of other players nastiness.


I would like to write an post the essay below on Facebook.
You are right, you write an essay. But when we write something on Facebook we call it "posting".
This is the a maze-style treasure hunting game in a maze made by some pieces of that is played with cards.
You can make maze into a adjective by saying "maze-style", and use that to describe the game. You can also say "...made of cards.", the "some pieces of" part is unnecessary. When we say "made by", we are talking about WHO made the game. You can say WHAT makes the game with "made of" or "made up of".
Players slide the cards, which has each shape of are marked with the same shapes as the path, and move their pieces to reach there their objective treasures while disturbing other players' routes.
"Players slide the cards and move the pieces to...." + "The cards have the same shapes as the path." = "Players slide the cards, which have the same shapes as the path, and move the pieces to....."
Also,
their = 彼らのX
there = そこ
They go to the objective treasures at the same time as the disturb the routes, so we use "while".
Sometimes it makes for an awkward atmosphere because of other players nastiness.
I can't explain this one, it just sounds more natural.
I mean that we use the cards -square tiles- which are printed different kind of routes for example "straight","T-type", and "L-type corner" etc.
So, "Players slide the cards, which are marked with the same shapes as the path" is little bit defferent from what I want to explane.
Could you tell me how should I write?
あ。非常にごめんなさい。 If I were to write that from scratch, I would say
"Players draw cards, which are marked with the routes on the board, and move their pieces accordingly in order to reach their objective treasures and disturb the other players' routes." It's a very complex sentence, for sure, but I think it makes the most sense if you want to write everything in one sentence. Would you like me to break it down into smaller sentences?
I will write "Players slide and move tiles, which are marked with the routes on the board. And move their pieces accordingly in order to reach their objective treasures and interfere with the other players' routes."
I use "tiles" instead of "cards" in order to make clear the defference between square route tiles and rectangular treasure cards.
Thank you!
This is the a treasure hunting game played through in a maze made using several by some pieces of cards.
Players slide the cards with the same shapes through the which has each shape of path and move their pieces to reach their goal objective treasures breaking (distracting) disturbing other players' routes.
It's very fun but you should be careful.
Sometimes it makes creates an awkward atmosphere because of some other players nasty behavior.
What do you mean by this statement? Is it possible to cheat in this game? I think you need to be vigilant if this is so... lol...It sounds like an interesting game. Can we play it online kazu?
I don't know if there is an online version of this game.
Sometimes it makes creates an awkward atmosphere because of some other players nasty behavior.