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I would like to upload my article on my Facebook page.
Please check my English below!
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I usually do excercise walking on weekends.
I walk about an hour or so with my camera.
I like to take some photos of sky, trees, flowers, and so on.
Today I took some photos of flowers with rain drops.
It is spring in Japan.
New people who entered their companies started their works and their new lives.
Workplaces and towns are enlivened by young people.
There are some people who change their workplaces.
I hope they will acclimate themselves to the new jobs and the new coworkers.
Please check my English below!
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I usually do excercise walking on weekends.
I walk about an hour or so with my camera.
I like to take some photos of sky, trees, flowers, and so on.
Today I took some photos of flowers with rain drops.
It is spring in Japan.
New people who entered their companies started their works and their new lives.
Workplaces and towns are enlivened by young people.
There are some people who change their workplaces.
I hope they will acclimate themselves to the new jobs and the new coworkers.
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I usually do walking exercises on the weekends.
I like to take photos of the sky, trees, flowers, and so on.
Today I took some photos of flowers with rain drops on them.
New people who entered their companies started their jobs and their new lives.
Workplaces and towns are invigorated by young people.
I suppose enlivened is fine here but I think there are better choices since it's not really used outside of literature.
"Spring in Japan" Could you check my English?
I usually exercise by walking on weekends.
I walk about an hour or so. While walking, I bring my camera with me.
It is Spring in Japan.
New people employees who have just entered their companies have started their working and living their new lives.
Workplaces and towns are enlivened by young people.
I think "enlivened" is okay. However, you may also use the word "brightened". You may also use the word, "crowded" but this has a different meaning, of course. :)
I really understood "have started working and living".
Is it better "Spring" than "spring"?
I understand why "Spring" is better in this case.
I usually exercise by walking over the weekend.
I like to take photos of the sky, trees, flowers, and so on.
People are starting their careers and their new lives.
"People are starting their careers and their new lives" is better!
It meets what I want to express.
Thank you, again!