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tetti
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他の人が添削した所を除けば、あとの文章は完璧です！
except for where others have corrected, the rest is perfect!

Apr 24th 2013 12:10 Public 本当の理由は何か？
kyoko -きょうこ-
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I agree with jun-san that でも/しかし should follow a 。 period, like jun-san's examples :) The same thing can be said about だから. 彼女はかわいい。だから人気がある。 彼女はかわいいから人気がある。 Both are okay ;]
That really helps clear up a lot of things. Now I hope I can actually REMEMBER that when writing my entries:)

Corrections and help like this is what makes coming to Lang-8 something I ENJOY doing!

Nov 21st 2012 12:29 Public 今週 (¬_¬)

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