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Today the rain heavily, Auckland no cloudless sky,at the same time I don't have good mood, so I wish tomorrow is a good weather.
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Today it rained heavily. In Auckland the sky is never cloudless. (Because of this,) I'm not in a good mood, so I hope the weather is good tomorrow.
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