My holiday after a long my school
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Today is my holiday after a long my school.
So, I planned to do something fanny.
I did at first was that I went to CD shop to rent CD of music.
I like listening rock music. It excite me every time.
I rented five CDs, all rock music, in shop.
Then, I went to a beauty parlor to be cut my hair.
Though my hair was long, I asked assistant to cut to arrange my hair.
Then, I was satisfied with all and I went back home.
And, I listened music which I have rented a short while ago before.
I satisfied very much today.
So, I planned to do something fanny.
I did at first was that I went to CD shop to rent CD of music.
I like listening rock music. It excite me every time.
I rented five CDs, all rock music, in shop.
Then, I went to a beauty parlor to be cut my hair.
Though my hair was long, I asked assistant to cut to arrange my hair.
Then, I was satisfied with all and I went back home.
And, I listened music which I have rented a short while ago before.
I satisfied very much today.
So, I planned to do something fun.
Fun? Funny?
I first went to the CD shop to rent some CDs.
I like listening to rock music.
It excites me every time.
I rented five CDs, all rock music, at the shop.
Then, I went to a beauty parlor and got my hair cut.
Though my hair was long, I asked assistant to cut to arrange my hair.
I'd need an explanation or to see in Japanese what you are trying to say before I can give you an accurate fix for this sentence.
My guess: "Though my hair was long, I asked the assistant to style my hair for me."
Then, I was satisfied with my day and I went back home.
Suggestion: "Now satisfied with my day, I went back home."
And, I listened to the music which I have rented for a short while ago before.
I'm very satisfied with my day.
So, what CDs did you rent? Anything good? :D
"Today is my holiday after a long my school."
I'm actually not positive about this line, either... I think the holiday should be ending around this time, not starting, so I think the sentence might be "Today is the last day of a long holiday that I have off from school."
I really want to be good at English...