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Hi , everyone I'm chinese . I really want make a friends with people in other countries .However I don't speak English very well However my classmate suggested learning English useing 'lang-8' I am new to this so maybe when i speak I have a little Chinese flavor and make some mistake So could you help me? Could someone Correct this essay? Perhaps we will become good friends!
In any case read this artcle thank you
In any case read this artcle thank you

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I think that's what you were going for.
Hi
Instead of a period you should use a comma here.
everyone I'm a Chinese people.
I really want to make friends with people in other countries .
However, I don't speak English well. My classmate give me a suggestion suggested learning English good way that is using 'lang-8'. I was am new to this so maybe when I speak I will have a little Chinese flavor and make some mistakes. So, could you help me?
Make sure to always capitalize "I".
Could someone correction this essay?
Perhaps we will become a good friends!
In any case read this article, thank you.