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You are on the road. You can slow down and enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way. Please remind yourself only if you're unable to go forward, can you stop your footsteps, dear!
It is about 4am now. Nightly night:):)
It is about 4am now. Nightly night:):)
Writing to Myself (3)
You are on the road.
this is technically correct, but we almost always say, "You're on the road." especially in casual speech.
Please remind yourself only if you're unable to go forward, can you stop your footsteps, dear!
I can't really correct it because I can't really understand what you are trying to say. But good try, :p
Nightly night:):)Nighty night
Please remind yourself only if you're unable to go forward, can you stop your footsteps, dear!
I agree with the previous comments that the meaning is unclear. I was uncertain whether the meaning was either: (a) to remind yourself that if you are unable to proceed, you can stop; or (b) whether you should remind yourself only when unable to proceed. Perhaps consider the following alternatives:
"Please remind yourself: only if you're unable to go forward, can you stop your footsteps, dear"; or
"Please remind yourself once you are unable to go forward, that you can stop your footsteps, dear".
Kristian
If you a're unable to go forward, please remind yourself to stop, dear!
I'm not sure what you were trying to say. I just wrote a possible alternative :)
If you are unable to go forward, please remind yourself to stop, dear!
or
"As long as you can go forward, always keep going" :)
(I think that my second sentence sounds more positive than the first)
I think that most people write odd sentences when they are sleepy :)
Please remind yourself only if you're unable to go forward, can you stop what you're doing and start in a new direction, dear!
It is about 4 a.m. now. I'm a real night owl.
But, please remind yourself you can only stop your footsteps if you're unable to go forward, dear!
I changed the positions of a few words. I think you meant that one continues forward until one meets a barrier.