Protection Of Animals
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Now almost all countries are protecting endangered wildlife. Every time I saw this news, I've been thinking why human beings always do such things? Precisely it is our injuries resulting in these animals were gradually reduced to the states of endangered. As an excuse of protecting animals, we catch them from the wild to a zoo or training base, forcing them to survive and breed in the environment created by human beings, and then treat them as an object for tourists to view.
I don’t think it is the correct way to protect animals. Since arrested into the zoo, they became prisoners which lost freedom, happiness and the meaning of existence in the food chain. Animals are independent individuals, just like humans. We are equal, having equal lives, equal rights and equal dignities, so we should give each other equal respects, but not driving them as toys.
Please don’t be so cruel. Return animals the general rights of growth, illness and death in a free environment, it is the rules that the nature sets.
That’s my reason for writing this diary.
I don’t think it is the correct way to protect animals. Since arrested into the zoo, they became prisoners which lost freedom, happiness and the meaning of existence in the food chain. Animals are independent individuals, just like humans. We are equal, having equal lives, equal rights and equal dignities, so we should give each other equal respects, but not driving them as toys.
Please don’t be so cruel. Return animals the general rights of growth, illness and death in a free environment, it is the rules that the nature sets.
That’s my reason for writing this diary.
Currently, almost all countries are protecting endangered wildlife.
This word is used in more formal English. Also, use a comma after a statement of time which starts a sentence. Example: Wednesday, I went to class. This afternoon, I took a nap.
Now almost all countries are protecting endangered wildlife.
Great English!
Every time I saw this news, I've been wondering about why human beings always do such things?
Always for me: Red = corrections, blue = suggestions.
Actually it is our modification of habitats or actually shooting or trapping animals which results in these animals were gradually being reduced in numbers until they reach to the states of being endangered which causes their endangerment.
We make excuses for protecting animals. We catch them from the wild and put them in zoos, forcing them to survive and breed in the environment created by human beings. In reality, we only treat them as objects for tourists to view.
As a biologist who specialized in rare species, I could provide much more detail!
After being thrown into a zoo, they become prisoners who have lost their freedom, happiness and the meaning of existence in the natural world.
Animals are independent individuals, just like humans.
That's why I refer to them as "who" and not "what."