The Beer Party
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Yesterday, in the morning, my friends and I were just chatting in my room.
Then we were bored and looking for something fun thing.
A few minutes later, we decided to have a beer party tonight.
So, we went to Shopping Centre to get beers and something to eat.
There are super cheap Chickens with soy source, so we picked two chickens up and put in our barket.
And went to beer shop, they were selling a box of XXXX Gold about 39 dollars, we bought it, and went home.
We took a rest about an hour, and started to cook chicken with oven.
We bought chickens too much, so I had to cook in twice.
After cooking chickens and setting up a table and cheirs, we started our party!
A few hours later, I couldn't get drunk even though I'd liked to get drunk.
It turned out those beers were 3.5 percent proof, so I had to bed without getting drunk.
Then we were bored and looking for something fun thing.
A few minutes later, we decided to have a beer party tonight.
So, we went to Shopping Centre to get beers and something to eat.
There are super cheap Chickens with soy source, so we picked two chickens up and put in our barket.
And went to beer shop, they were selling a box of XXXX Gold about 39 dollars, we bought it, and went home.
We took a rest about an hour, and started to cook chicken with oven.
We bought chickens too much, so I had to cook in twice.
After cooking chickens and setting up a table and cheirs, we started our party!
A few hours later, I couldn't get drunk even though I'd liked to get drunk.
It turned out those beers were 3.5 percent proof, so I had to bed without getting drunk.
Yesterday, in the morning, my friends and I were just chatting in my room.
Then We were bored and looking for something fun to do thing.
A few minutes later, we decided to have a beer party that night. tonight.
"Tonight" means that your party is today at night.
"That night" means that your part was the night of the story.
So, We went to Shopping Centre to get beers and something to eat.
There are super cheap chickens with soy source, so we picked up two chickens up and put them in our cart barket.
"Barket" isn't a word. I think you mean "cart" or "basket".
Cart - Bigger carrier on wheels that you roll on the floor.
Basket - Smaller carrier with handles that you carry in your hands.
And Then we went to a beer shop. They were selling a box of XXXX Gold for about 39 dollars, so we bought it and went home.
We took a rested for about an hour, and then started to cooked the chicken with in the oven.
We bought too much chickens too much, so I had to cook in twice.
After cooking the chickens and setting up a table and chairs, we started our party!
A few hours later, I couldn't get drunk, even though I'd liked wanted to get drunk.
It turned out those beers were 3.5 percent proof, so I had to go to bed without getting drunk.
Yesterday, in the morning, my friends and I were just (having this here is okay for me) chatting in my room.
Then (also okay for me) we became (to show change, but "were" is not wrong) bored and started looking for something fun to do thing.
So, we went to Shopping Centre to get beers some beer and something to eat.
"Beer" is uncountable. You can also say "cans of beer" or "bottles".
There are super cheap Chickens chicken with soy sauce, so we picked two chickens up and put them in our basket.
When you are talking about the FOOD "chicken", it is uncountable. It is also just a common noun, so don't capitalize
In "we picked two chickens up", I decided to remove "chicken" because it is already understood. I also decided to remove "up" because it is not really needed. It's like saying "we chose two".
And Then we went to a beer shop, and they were selling a box of XXXX Gold for about 39 dollars. We bought it and went home.
We have to split the sentence into two parts to organize the ideas better. This is another way of splitting it.
We took a rest for about an hour, and then started to cook the chicken with in the oven.
We bought too much chicken, so I had to cook in twice.
After cooking the chicken and setting up a table and chairs, we started our party!
It turned out the beer was 3.5 percent proof, so I had to go to bed without getting drunk.
You can talk about "beer" as that "one kind of beer" as a whole.