Of Mice and Man
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Keep walking
We shall go to the end, but not be afraid and just keep walking.
I saw you walk in the field and in the street.
I know I will always travel with you.
You love pets and bloody ketchup.
You a heartless man! God I hate you!
But I know I will always travel with you.
The sun's rays reflected off the lake.
The moon was rising from the sea, despite of those ups and downs.
We shall go to the end, but not be afraid and just keep walking.
I will tell you the story: our own land.
I won't turn your head back until it's God's good time.
We shall go to the end, but not be afraid and just keep walking.
I could see you playing with your rabbits with your smile
I could hear your crying in distance and their death.
We shall go to the end, but not be afraid and just keep walking.
We shall go to the end, but not be afraid and just keep walking.
To be honest, you complete me, always and always.
Just as you expect, we shall keep walking.
And I'm sure I will always travel with you.
We shall go to the end, but not be afraid and just keep walking.
I saw you walk in the field and in the street.
I know I will always travel with you.
You love pets and bloody ketchup.
You a heartless man! God I hate you!
But I know I will always travel with you.
The sun's rays reflected off the lake.
The moon was rising from the sea, despite of those ups and downs.
We shall go to the end, but not be afraid and just keep walking.
I will tell you the story: our own land.
I won't turn your head back until it's God's good time.
We shall go to the end, but not be afraid and just keep walking.
I could see you playing with your rabbits with your smile
I could hear your crying in distance and their death.
We shall go to the end, but not be afraid and just keep walking.
We shall go to the end, but not be afraid and just keep walking.
To be honest, you complete me, always and always.
Just as you expect, we shall keep walking.
And I'm sure I will always travel with you.
"We shall go to the end"
This sounds very bleak. Like they are going to their deaths.
"God's good time"
Doesn't this refer to when someone is going to die?
"You love pets and bloody ketchup.
You a heartless man! God I hate you!
But I know I will always travel with you."
This creates a lot of tension in the readers mind.
Of course I am just one person. I would be interested in how other native English speakers interpret your poem.