We held a sushi party today!
Today is my son's birthdays, so we held a sushi party.
He became ten years old.
We covered the table with sheets of Saran Warp and then we decorated the table with sushis.
Of course, sushis are homemade.
My son loves sushi but also he makes sushis very well.
After the party, my son and I went to buy his present.
He had already decided what his birthday present was.
It was the 3DS of Nintendo.(and Monster Hunter.)
I bought it for my son but I'm afraid that he doesn't study by it.
I have great faith in you, my son!
He became ten years old.
We covered the table with sheets of Saran Warp and then we decorated the table with sushis.
Of course, sushis are homemade.
My son loves sushi but also he makes sushis very well.
After the party, my son and I went to buy his present.
He had already decided what his birthday present was.
It was the 3DS of Nintendo.(and Monster Hunter.)
I bought it for my son but I'm afraid that he doesn't study by it.
I have great faith in you, my son!
今日は息子の誕生日なので、お寿司パーティーをしました。
息子は１０才になりました。
私たちはサランラップでテーブルを覆い、テーブルの上をお寿司で飾りました。
もちろん、お寿司は私たち家族の手作りです。
私の息子はお寿司が好きでが、にぎるのも上手です。
パーティーの後で、息子と私で誕生日プレゼントを買いに行きました。
彼はプレゼントとして買うものを決めていました。
それは任天堂の3DSです。(とモンスターハンターです。)
私はそれを買いましたが、それのせいで勉強がおろそかになるのが心配です。
息子よ、私は君を信じているよ〜！
息子は１０才になりました。
私たちはサランラップでテーブルを覆い、テーブルの上をお寿司で飾りました。
もちろん、お寿司は私たち家族の手作りです。
私の息子はお寿司が好きでが、にぎるのも上手です。
パーティーの後で、息子と私で誕生日プレゼントを買いに行きました。
彼はプレゼントとして買うものを決めていました。
それは任天堂の3DSです。(とモンスターハンターです。)
私はそれを買いましたが、それのせいで勉強がおろそかになるのが心配です。
息子よ、私は君を信じているよ〜！
We covered the table with sheets of Saran Warp and then we decorated the table with sushi.
Of course, sushi is homemade.
My son loves sushi and he also makes it very well.
There is no need to state sushi more than once, it sounds too repetitive.
It was the 3DS of Nintendo, (and Monster Hunter.)
You could also say, "It was a Nintendo 3DS...".
I bought it for my son but I'm afraid that he won't study by it.
Your corrections help me study English.
'the sushi' is only my topic one.
'sushi' is general one.
Thank you.
We covered the table with sheets of saran wrap, and then we decorated the table with sushi.
sushi is both plural and singular in English too
saran wrap is not a proper noun and therefore doesn't get capitalized
Of course, the sushi is homemade.
My son not only loves sushi, but he also makes it very well.
It sounds more native and natural to swap out the noun for a pronoun if it has already been stated earlier in the same sentence. For example: We brought cake home and then we ate it. (as opposed to: We brought cake home and then we ate the cake.)
He had already decided what his birthday present will be.
"He had already decided what his birthday present was." (This sounds like he already owns the present and has figured out what it is, instead of what it is going to be.)
He chose the Nintendo 3DS; along with the game and Monster Hunter.
Sounds much more natural stated this way
I bought it for my son but I'm afraid that he doesn't study because of it.
I want to learn more about tense, idioms and a conjunction in order to speak natural English.
Today is my son's birthday, so we held a sushi party.
"birthday" is singular, unless you are talking about multiple people
He becameturned ten years old.
We covered the table with sheets of Saran Warp and then we decorated the table with sushis.
Of course, the sushis are is homemade.
My son loves sushi but and also he he also makes sushis very well.
I think "and" is a better choice here. "But" is used to contrast two ideas.
He had already decided what his birthday present was would be.
It was the 3DS of Nintendo Nintendo 3DS.(and Monster Hunter.).
Periods always come after parentheses, not inside them or before them.
I bought it for my son but I'm afraid that he doesn't won't study by it.
It's difficult for me to understand singular or plural form of a word in English.
I'll study hard.
Of course, the sushis are was homemade.
I bought it for my son but I'm afraid that he won't doesn't study because of it by it.
We enjoyed the party.
We had a good time.
Can you find it?
Please look at my picture from right hand side.
It's may not be so fun. Sorry.......(^_^ ;)
It was simple, and not elaborated.
By the way, I like 大とろ！ but it's too expensive.