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Apr 8, 2012 09:51 influenza flu
I have caught a cold infected from my son since four days ago.
Other hand,my wife didn't that,in spite of caring for him.
I thought "Mother is strong."
The cold embarassing me is "the flu"
I was fever so hard. But that period was very short for a new drug.
This new drug is called "Inavir(R)" .
When I knew Tamiflu and Relenza ,I didn't think new influenza drug appear.
Because it is revolutionary to prevent from the virus increasing directly.
But Inavir's superior point is only one time to take.
Others have to be took as several times.
So its total cost can be lower than others by reducing package and stock expense.
I think that the drug company's race is so hard too.
But,even though the cost is lower for company,that payment is expensive for me.
This time, I paid two thousand yen for it.
When converted to U.S. dollars,it's about $24.
If I hadn't caught a cold ,I would have delicious steak.

Thank you for reading my diary and please correct my English.

(posted pictures:the influenza virus and the structure of "Inavir(R)" )
Nicole
Thank you for your correction!
Apr 8, 2012 13:44
  • I have caught a cold infected from my son since four days ago.

  • I caught a cold from my son four days ago.

 
  • I was fever so hard.

  • I had a bad fever.

 
  • But that period was very short for a new drug.

  • But I didn't have a fever for very long. I bought new drugs.

    The sentence was a little confusing. Were you saying that you didn't have a fever for very long because you got new drugs?

 
  • When I knew Tamiflu and Relenza ,I didn't think new influenza drug appear.

  • When I heard of Tamiflu and Relenza, I didn't think new influenza drugs would appear.

 
  • Because it is revolutionary to prevent from the virus increasing directly.

  • The technolgy is revolutionary. It prevents the virus from increasing.

 
  • But Inavir's superior point is only one time to take.

  • But Inavir's greatest point is that you only have to take it one time.

 
  • Others have to be took as several times.

  • Others have to be taken several times.

 
  • So its total cost can be lower than others by reducing package and stock expense.

  • So its total cost can be lower than others by reducing packaging and stock expense.

 
  • But,even though the cost is lower for company,that payment is expensive for me.

  • However, even though the cost is lower for company, the payment is expensive for me.

 
  • If I hadn't caught a cold ,I would have delicious steak.

  • If I hadn't caught a cold, I would have had delicious steak.

 

I hope you recover from the cold soon ^^

Apr 9, 2012 06:17 kazoo
But that period was very short for a new drug.
→The sentence was a little confusing. Were you saying that you didn't have a fever for very long because you got new drugs
→Yes,I was. I wanted to say that just your comment.

Thank you your polite correction.
That was very educational.
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