A Few Questions

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May 29, 2012 19:21
In the past month, some times my journal entries were corrected, but I have not understood all of the corrections. Here are 3 questions that I have been being puzzled by. Could you please tell me why?

Wrong: Finally, I got a break to write this entry.
Right: Finally, I got a break and my opportunity to write this entry.
Finally, I got a break and was able to write this entry.

Is this also wrong: I could't find a break to reply you all the day.

Wrong: I promised a friend to write a journal entry.
Right: I promised a friend that I would write a journal entry.

What is the different between "I feel like" and "I feel that"?

Thanks! :)