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I'm so busy today that I almostly don't want to write the diary. But I finally made my mind to carry on writing. I passed my running test of 800 meters in the afternoon. And I have a meeting as a student union member to discuss about the donation for poor students before my supper. I prepared for my test this evening till 20:30 in the library. Then I had a meeting about an activity called learn from Leifeng. As soon as I arrived at my dormitory, I washed my clothes. Thus, I post it later today. Good evening, my friends.
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I'm so busy today that I almostly don't want to write this diary,
but I finally made my mind to carry on writing.
It isn't a strict rule, but we try to avoid starting sentences with conjunctions (and, or, but). These two sentences are logically connected, so they can be put together in a compound sentence.
And I also have a meeting as a student union member to discuss about the donation for poor students before my supper.
Same note as above regarding starting a sentence with a conjunction. Another way to correct this would be to connect them as a compound sentence.
I prepared for my test this evening until 20:30 in the library.
These were minor corrections. Good post! Let me know if you have any questions.