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My tirp to a wetland park
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I want to share my experience, having an outdoor activity last Saturday. That's really impressive and very interesting.
We have finished some tasks working groups. We rent a special bicycle which can carry 4 people each time to walk around the park. We even made a kite our own, it's very difficult and it didn't fly up to the sky at last. What a pity!
These are all precious memories, I hope I can share this with you!
We have finished some tasks working groups. We rent a special bicycle which can carry 4 people each time to walk around the park. We even made a kite our own, it's very difficult and it didn't fly up to the sky at last. What a pity!
These are all precious memories, I hope I can share this with you!

My trip to a wetland park
Not sure but it definitely doesn't sound right... Maybe you don't need "wetland".
I want to share my experience, of having an outdoor activity last Saturday.
It was really impressive and very interesting.
Do note past tense.
We have finished some tasks working in groups.
Although you say "working in groups", the task you finished was just "in groups". Not very sure how to explain it...
We rented a special bicycle which can carry 4 people each at a time to walk cycle around the park.
Remember past tense. "at a time" refers to "same time". "cycle" is the verb used to move on a bike.
We even made a our own kite, it was very difficult and it didn't last fly up to in the sky longat .
You made your "own kite". This is the correct grammatical structure.
Remember past tense.
This one is a bit fiddly but you can say that it "didn't last in the sky long" to say that it didn't fly very much.
These are all precious memories to me, which I hope I have can shared this with you!
You need to tell us who you're talking about.
Not sure what to do with this but it gives the meaning that that says "I have shared it with you".
Sounds like it was a lot of fun! Good luck!