WE ARE THE CHAMPION

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Mar 30, 2012 23:34
We are the champion! Today is the big day for Beijing basketball team, it's the final competition point. With the great victory of Marbury and all of the player, we finally got it! I could help myself to cheer, to shed tears! It's so excited, I thought i might not sleep tonight!
WE ARE THE CHAMPION!!!
WhonderWy
Mar 31, 2012 21:07
  • We are the champion!

  • We are the champions!

    Weirdly enough, it's referred to as "champions" when used like this. At least, it sounds better to me like this.

 
  • Today is the big day for Beijing basketball team, it's the final competition point.

  • Today was the a big day for the Beijing basketball team. It was the finals competition point.

    No need for "competition point". It doesn't make sense in English anyway.

 
  • With the great victory of Marbury and all of the player, we finally got it!

  • With the great victory of Marbury and all of the other players, we finally got won it!

    Not sure if I got the meaning right but this is grammatically right I hope.

 
  • I could help myself to cheer, to shed tears!

  • I could help myself to cheer, to shed tears!

    This is a bit confusing... But I think you meant "I could not help myself but to cheer while shedding tears!" or something.

 
  • It's so excited, I thought i might not sleep tonight!

  • I'm so excited, I thought I might not sleep tonight!

    Whenever "I" is by itself, it is a "capital" "I". So when it's used as part of a word it's the "lowercase" "i".

 
  • WE ARE THE CHAMPION!!!

  • WE ARE THE CHAMPIONS!!!

    Again.

 

Congratulations on the Beijing team winning! But do try to sleep tonight!

Mar 31, 2012 21:28 Kelly
Thank you very much! I didn't realize all this problems in my English speaking! It help me a lot!

Mar 31, 2012 21:31 WhonderWy
You don't generally notice unless you've spent a long time listening to it. It's the same with every other language.
Kelly
Mar 31, 2012 21:56

I do think so, I'll keep trying. Thank you after all

burtstar
Apr 12, 2012 12:47
  • I could help myself to cheer, to shed tears!

  • I couldn't help myself to cheer, to shed tears!

    This is one of those strange expressions where no means yes. If you eat too much you would say, "I couldn't help eating three pieces of cake." In other words, I was not able to stop.

 
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